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My Barbaric YAWP
2009-12-05 . chapter 10
Oh this is getting good! Great work; I'm looking forward to more :)
Ro38
2009-11-30 . chapter 10
Another great full of action(fighting action LOL) chapter ! I was so happy to see another chapter today, i swear i was thinking today hm wonder when the next chapter will go up? :) I feel so bad for Maddie, she was so hurt by all of the stuff from back then and that snake Annie ,i knew she was being sneaky ,wow she got what she deserved! HAHAHAHA Now my question to myself is hm wonder when chapter 11 will be up? HEHEHE AWESOME writing! Loved the end talk with Bert and David too! :)
Ro38
2009-11-17 . chapter 9
WOW i get my internet back after moving and find another part to this fabulous story! WOW such great stuff! All that is going inside M/D i can just feel it as i read your story with this chapter. Poor Maddie really was hurt so bad by D/A. ANd that Annie is up to no good! I can feel it! LOL I can't wait for the next chapter! Hope it's soon! BRAVO again!
GentleReader
2009-11-17 . chapter 9
Oh, that Annie...quick, somebody hand me a rotten tomato! :)

Nice job using dialogue and little asides to move the plot forward, while giving us more insight into the characters. Had to laugh at Maddie's closet carnage--taking out her frustration on those poor belts and shoes!

Can't wait to see where this goes...
diane
2009-11-16 . chapter 9
Nice job, Bees. Hope our girl Annie gets just what she deserves.
ManitobaDesigner
2009-11-16 . chapter 9
Ah! That was indeed a nuclear Maddie blast, loved this chapter!
Loved David's line about the ponytail too!!

Great job!
Ro38
2009-10-29 . chapter 8
YAY! WHat a wonderful thing to find today,with being sick all week i needed a pick me up and this was perfect or is it PERFETC? LOL WOW just amazing stuff! WHat a great thing to have finally hapened between them! SIGH SIGH SIGH I always wanted them to get together again and realize they always needed each other and loved each other. We never got that with the show but your giving us all we could dream of even with some drama thrown in in the name of A**IE LOL OH NO why now? LOL I'm so nervous about whats going to happen? How can you make me and the other readers of course, wait now for the next chapter? LOL PLease dont keep us waiting to long ok?
ManitobaDesigner
2009-10-29 . chapter 8
Oh that was just so perfect! I'm swooning!!

Excellent chapter, Bees, I can't wait to see what happens when they answer the door!
AlabamaBound
2009-10-29 . chapter 8
Oh!! Another great chapter!! Can't wait to read more!!
Anne
2009-10-18 . chapter 7
Beesnbears,
what a wonderful chapter again, and I must say that I tried hard not to cry while reading it .
The end was so intense and moving that I felt the tears coming.
I can't wait for the next chapter,

good job!

Anne;)
Ro38
2009-10-17 . chapter 7
I think I am going to faint from excitement! LOL Wow so what the Dr ordered! This chapter was so full of so many wonderful things! I was screaming for joy when i saw there was a new chapter, Did you hear me scream? LOL The conversations are ones i really wish they got to have on tv so thank you for giving us this 2nd chance with your fanfic! Keep it coming! But dont make us wait too too long LOL :)
GentleReader
2009-09-25 . chapter 6
You've made a SPLASH with this one, bees! I love how David doesn't let her get away with the "Hayes backside"; that moment by the pool is so sweet!

My favorite line, though: "And there was the other shoe. Only he didn’t see it coming and it practically hit him in the back of the head." Classic!

Great title, too! :)
Ro38
2009-09-22 . chapter 6
WHOHO! YAY for another great great chapter! I knew Maddie wasnt falling that quickly for his charms like he thought cause the push in the pool was great! LOL Love all the thoughts going through Davids head! Now i'm screaming cause the chapter is over and i want more! LOL No pressure! It's really a super story! Loving it so much!
AddisonHayes75
2009-09-22 . chapter 6
Hahahahaha! I love this story. Very cute and honest. I just knew he was going in the pool. I did think though that she would be pulled in with him though. Keep it up, it's great!
My Barbaric YAWP
2009-09-19 . chapter 5
I think we could all do with a little chasing :) Loving it and looking forward to more!
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