I must agree with John that it's really stupid that Sam asked for a game outside the car and for Dean to agree.
But I'm glad they're all okay.

great story... i think John was a little to harsh though... but thats just my opinion... anyways update soon!good job :)

That was a really good One-Shot. Especially the "I'm bored"-scens with Sam. I have two younger brothers - I can totally connect with Dean!
I like the "Big, Mean and Ugly" - great idea to avoid researching some 'real' monster. And the Wengio is getting old after the 1.0th story... Mind if I borrow it one day?
AND I like the way you balance John between being a real father and a total jerk at the same time - because seriously, some fanfictions just go overboard with making him an ass. I dan't like the way he treated his kids, but I'm sure he was never really really bad.
So - after everything said and done - great story!

Awesome oneshot. I love the way Sam went all protective against his dad. And yeah, John's right, he is going to have to deal with the ramifications of creating suh a close bond between his children.

hey great start keep up the good work and update soon please!

OMG I LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED IT! Whoot definetly worth the prize! Portrayed perfectly AH Loved it LOL.