Very nice, but I would have liked it more if it were just a bit longer. half a paragraph or so.
But it's still good. Nice way of showing his emotions!

Touching AJ great chapter it gives me a back round of the character.

P.S. I got my story for act one done but i got to wait till the weekend to post it.

P.S.S Love the story so far.

I like that you're showing us more about Montblanc's past and how he feels after all that time. It shows more about Montblanc as a person (or moogle(?)) and I enjoyed it. There were just a couple of spelling mistakes, but besides that I thought that the story was excellent.

I really liked this one. So touching.