Ah man, I would love for a sequel to this with the three of them! I will patiently wait and watch you for it, in the hopes that one day you will post it. :D
Anyway, I freakin' loved this. It was hilarious how Yusuke could really think that they could hide from them! I liked how they whispered about it, making it seem (to Yusuke) that they were just talking dirty, and how you described Kurama's expression after...! Could picture it perfectly and man, was it amazing! lol!
One of the things I love most about this fic, though, is Hiei and Kurama's constant banter throughout this entire fic. It just made it perfect. And I liked Yusuke's comment about wondering if he'd always found sex so amusing, lol. You'd think that Kurama would be able to get Hiei's pants off easier! Hiei wanting the pants to win. xDD
"prove to me you're alive. Prove to me you're still here." I love that description of their kiss.
Once again, great job. Love lots of things about this, funny and sexy. :D

A sequel would be awesome! :O

This was absolutely in character-and if the fox and fire breather were to have relations intimately-I'm pretty certain this would be it. Thanks for a toasty fiction!

Oh god, I about died laughing. This is amazing, and really hot!

SOO... HOTT... You write extremely well.

I love it! That's awesome, delicious, and hilarious!

...remember that last review where I whined about crying and stuff because everything was sad?

Yeah nevermind that. I will never stop grinning now. This was just pure genius. Everything. SO HOT. It's the dead of the night now so I had to very much stifle my moans like Yusuke while reading this, but it was amazing and I'm going to read it again and again and again. ajklsshjdld.

Cracking up right now... that was too lovely! What a fun idea. : D

LOL, i loved the ending

I'm still gonna alert it! You write so well! :D I can't wait for you to someday continue the story!

That... was hilarious. Though my heart was pounding right along with Yuusuke's, despite having figured toward the beginning that they knew he was there.

*drools*

ahem; good to know that it could have a sequel

oh gods. sequelsequelseeeequel! threesome! ah! *dies*

This was awesome... well the parts that I read...

I don't like graphic sex scenes, but they're in half the well written fics, so I've learned to scan for safe cues... (usually conversation, you can't really scar yourself too much from reading dirty talk...)

I loved the end...

So I guess I should probably send you at least one review. I just keep reading and reading your stories and never really end up reviewing, so for that, I'm sorry. I figured I'd reply to this one because the end made me laugh more than anything I've ever read before. I'm sure you've gotten this a lot, but let me tell you how amazing and enjoyable your work is to read. I appreciate you using your amazing ability to create such wondrous pieces of work for others to enjoy, and am glad a fellow HxK fan is able to write such amazing work. You and a few others I've found, such as Blue Utopia and... someone else, crap, I don't remember. Anywho, I want to thank you for putting up such amazing work for us to enjoy. You seem to hit almost every approachable angle of their relationship and make it so much better than anything I could ever hope of writing. So thanks again, now I must go back to reading the rest of your HxK work... and look forward to seeing anything you may put up in the near future

Takara