My god, that was fantastic. I loved every sentence; especially your description of the shepherd's pie... call me crazy. ;)

Really great writing; the dialogue was impeccable and emotive. I'm a stickler for that and it saddens me to say you just don't find good dialogue very often in slash. Good to know I can always count on you for restoring my faith in the glory that is fanfiction. :)

Excellent job; do keep it up.

-Peace

Hach - all my fangirl dreams are satisfied... so beautiful...

wonderful story!

Good plot to the story, a little bit upset about the ending, its not as good as i imagined, but yeah 8/10 in my opinion :)

whoot! that was so sexy =D
i loved it. great job!

lovely... I had already read it so you know what I think (I hope).
But yah, :P, GOOD JOB xDD

^^

*wild applause*
Bravo!
=]

I loved the entire idea of this story and I was thrilled to see an update! You finished it off brilliantly, what with Ginny's thinking Hermione was just trying to make her feel better by saying she liked her, too.

=]
Great job, and thanks for a fun read!

D'aw. A happy, smutty ending to a tension-filled saga of romance and intrigue.

Or something like that, anyway. Good show, as ever, though one slight mistake caught my eye. Ginny's eyes are brown, and you called them "crystal blue". Nothing major, just something I noticed. Good job, again.

La historia impresionante. puede esperar más.

likeing Ginny/Hermione pairing cnt wait 4 the nxt update :) G x

I loved it.
I don't like writing comments like that when I know I can make an effort and review with constructive criticism and so on, but I just had to say it.
It's really hard to find a yuri story that stays IC, more so one that is as well written as yours; so, my hat comes off for you, I'll just shower you with praises since I really don't have anything to criticize, except maybe that the next chapter can't come soon enough. There's gonna be a next one, right? That's why you build up all that tension, so they can have the nice heart to heart and maybe something more?

I hope you do write a next one, because I'm dying to read what's next.
I'll be waiting! Oh, and I'm adding it to my favorites, too!
Much love and cookies to you!


PS: I'm sorry for the long review, I do hope you don't mind, though. ;P

Wow, just wow. This was refreshing! I have been reading really moderate work for the past few weeks, I think I almost forgot what real writing looked like! This was extremely well done, and I will deffinately be waiting for Part I. PLEASE don't take to long! My sanity is at stake! (or what's left of it, anyway)
~Chi^_^

Tt was very good up until the part where Hermione says she loves her. To me, that just came way too soon and it kinda turned me off.
What I mean is that I don't really feel the chemistry between them, I mean like have you checked the chemistry in "Sink, Burn Burn, Sink?" holy shit. they are the same characters but with amazing chemistry.
In this story it was just too soon.
I'm sorry this is such a long and pointless review because it's not like you can just take that part out.

ok I'm done, lol sorry..

this is a very interesting story. I like your writing style. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Great chapter. Duh you love her, now go get her!