I truly regret not giving this proper recognition. Well, here's my review; it's dark, and usually dark isn't my thing, but I like it. I wish you would continue this, even though it's been like eight months. Or at least post it to the yahoo group, we could use stories of this caliber.

XP gross

I really like this chapter. Strangely, I'm happy Sapphire chose to stay. :P

Yeah and update. :)

Hmm. Your story has good potential. You have a great way of making good dialogue and making and weaving the plot. Keep it up! I would like to see the next chapters of your story.

HOLY CRAP THIS IS AWSOME! i dont know wtf a pokeboy is or looks like, but i've read some pokegirl stories and i get the general idea. :3 its really good, oh and thanks for putting discriptions of what the pokeboys look like in there, helps alot

This is really good. Your a fantastic writer please update this soon.

I like the name Awaiamaru

Where can I find a picture of an Impurity?

O/o Shadow rape? Huh...

Bane is one smooth talking bastard. I love him!