 KitsuneOverlord 2009-10-13 . chapter 1*blink blink* *rubs eyes and takes another look*
LOL. That was pretty funny, if I may say so. And considering Rei's total lack of social knowledge (taboo's and such) I'm not really surprised that she used her clones.
Still, it's a bit out there. Good for me, as I like stuff that's a bit out there. |
 SpikeyKun 2009-04-16 . chapter 1XD. Interesting... Would expect Shinji to be more creeped out than interested in a younger clone of Rei, but it *is* a spamfic.
Kinda wondering just *who's* soul is in the clone though... they're supposed to be the base of the dummy plug system or something, eh? Kinda makes it seem like it's a bad idea to leave one laying around your *ahem* junk.
Also, age numbers don't seem to add up too well? Shinji says 30 years of marriage, which would easily put him and Rei nearing their 50's at least. (Rather old, ne?), whereas later you mention 18 years of clone incubation back when the couple got serious at the age of 18 (so 36 years which is less wrinkly... XD)
I think elements of this spamfic could be fun as a creepy/horror sorta fic. An older Shinji with a close physical resemblance to his father interacting with a younger Rei? Hm... ^_^
Anyways, love reading anythin you write. Keep it up! |
 dylanredefined 2009-04-16 . chapter 1Well the writings good ,but, your idea is a bit odd to say the least . |
 daniel-gudman 2009-04-15 . chapter 1You... you're DIRTY. |
 dogbertcarroll 2009-04-15 . chapter 1Love it! |
 Darksnider05 2009-04-15 . chapter 1Nothing really to say but tears and laughing at this really. |
 Materia-Blade 2009-04-15 . chapter 1*Laughs and laughs* |
 Bloodreaver Alpha 2009-04-15 . chapter 1*winces* This is...uh, interesting. A little uncomfortable, subject-matter-wise. I mean, good on you for the SxR thingy, but it's kind of awkward. |
 Loatroll 2009-04-15 . chapter 1Hehehehe how nice of her. |