Love it! That's just awesome!

AMEN IT TO TRUE

This was such an awesome and funny rap/poem. But I don't think Ash was ever jealous with ruby. I think he was mad because Ruby was paying attention only to Misty. AND MISTY WILL RETURN but guest staring instead of staying on the anime sadly T-T. I really hope that Ash and Misty ends up together.

oh sing it dude all those hint us pokeshippers can not be beat so back of haters aaml will rock ur world.

im not exactly an expert on rap but isnt it supposed to rhyme every 2 or 3 lines? :/

Hahhaha a rap! Awesome idea! Hooray! Your first story! I liked the ending! "Even through the show creators and producers says, That Misty will never be back again, But we shippers will always believe, Because we know true love will never die"

This was odd. Not bad but odd. You know,I've always had a theory that in many cases,no one has responded to. My opinion is that while Misty may have a crush on Ash,he doesn't notice 's too dense to understand.

's too wrapped up in his dream of becoming a pokemon master to notice.

So what do you think about that?

No...

Misty never to RETURN! NO

Not even as a special apperance WHY MISTY IS THE BEST!

NO

Any ways (sorry bout the break down) But I really liked this

;)Great please write more!

First post! :D

Hey, you made a story/rap! Cool! This is a good first fanfiction. You're now a *published* author- congrats! I always found that writing fanfiction poetry or songs was harder than writing stories, so kuddos to you for making one your first time. There are a few grammatical errors, but everybody has those. PM me if you want me to point them out to you!

My favorite line: And Dawn is only ten so that's against the law XD so funny! Sorry if you didn't intend it to be funny, but it was. And was this supposed to be a rhyming poem/rap?