I can't wait to see how this develops

Good chapter! Do I sense some smexi times ahead? Hopefully! please UPDATE! ^_^

long time no read...glad u posted! edward was yummy and dangerous in my mind when he said, "you better be here when i get bacl" and then again with, "you're not leaving me"...hott!

please write more!! this is really interesting!

this is REALY good! plz do more!

please write more its good


hailey leigh
death wish...no
crazy...yes
vampire...maybe

3 words -write more please!- oh my gosh that was good


hailey leigh
death wish...no
crazy...yes
vampire...maybe

WOW! I think this is an original story that has so very much potential and I think you should consider carrying it through. I would really like to read more! Thanks for sharing!

really good. I hope ya write more!

Interesting story. Very unique. I haven't read stories like that before. I can't wait until the next chapter.

I LOVE THIS STORY..its the first one different from all the others ive read where they are all vampires ...this is just amazing..cant wait to see where u go with this ...thnx for writing:)

aw
why can't they just be happy?
*tear*

Poor Bella and Edward. I hope everything works out for them. UPDATE!

-emogirl2011-

Is it wrong of me to hope the Volturi find out? I want war, dammit! That pissy 'fight scene' in Breaking Fail just didn't cut it.

Ahem.

Great job!

Interesting way of turning the tables. Good story!