this one was kick ass...

first things first, ive got to say that this whole series and idea of 50 words and less is extremely intelligent, not to mention awesome. being able to confine your thoughts into such little a words is highly interesting if not , does require alot of talent. short and sweet, its really good and anywhere to improve on? not much really.

i still love the way you condense your meaning.

you would do well in poetry. ]

That last one was my favorite. Simply put, but beautiful.

P.S. I have faithfully reviewed every single chapter in the last 20 minutes, and have now septuplified (spelling?) your reviews. In any case, you are a wonderful writer, and I am truly surprised that people waited until chapter 24 to review.

P.S.S. This is going to my favorites!

I hate worms, but this was hilarious.

Humorous angst? Interesting concept. Can't say I don't like it, but they deserve to be together.

Now, I can imagine Sakura doing that. :) Poor Kakashi, he got whipped.

So, he's injured? Typical banter. I love your characterizations of them.

Ah, both so obstinate. This one kept them rather in character. Je les aime.

So typical of him. Aloof, lazy Kakashi. Won't even take his clothes off. :)

Oh, this is sad. I really enjoyed it, though.

Ah, the complexity of love versus lust. Very well explored.

Ah, Adam and Eve. I'm not religious at all, but I find it very interesting the way you connected Naruto to the Bible. I like how he thinks about the consequences.

This one was beautiful. I like the metaphor of coffee.

The obligatory angst. This one is very good, and I like the passing mentions of what could have been.

This one put a smile on my face. Well-written.