|Reviews for Springtime & Temptation|
| darksoulwolf 11/8/09 . chapter 19
this one was kick ass...
| violaskye 5/27/09 . chapter 6
first things first, ive got to say that this whole series and idea of 50 words and less is extremely intelligent, not to mention awesome. being able to confine your thoughts into such little a words is highly interesting if not , does require alot of talent. short and sweet, its really good and anywhere to improve on? not much really.
i still love the way you condense your meaning.
you would do well in poetry. ]
| ChasingProse 5/21/09 . chapter 24
That last one was my favorite. Simply put, but beautiful.
P.S. I have faithfully reviewed every single chapter in the last 20 minutes, and have now septuplified (spelling?) your reviews. In any case, you are a wonderful writer, and I am truly surprised that people waited until chapter 24 to review.
P.S.S. This is going to my favorites!
| ChasingProse 5/21/09 . chapter 23
I hate worms, but this was hilarious.
| ChasingProse 5/21/09 . chapter 22
Humorous angst? Interesting concept. Can't say I don't like it, but they deserve to be together.
| ChasingProse 5/21/09 . chapter 21
Now, I can imagine Sakura doing that. :) Poor Kakashi, he got whipped.
| ChasingProse 5/21/09 . chapter 20
So, he's injured? Typical banter. I love your characterizations of them.
| ChasingProse 5/21/09 . chapter 19
Ah, both so obstinate. This one kept them rather in character. Je les aime.
| ChasingProse 5/21/09 . chapter 18
So typical of him. Aloof, lazy Kakashi. Won't even take his clothes off. :)
| ChasingProse 5/21/09 . chapter 17
Oh, this is sad. I really enjoyed it, though.
| ChasingProse 5/21/09 . chapter 16
Ah, the complexity of love versus lust. Very well explored.
| ChasingProse 5/21/09 . chapter 15
Ah, Adam and Eve. I'm not religious at all, but I find it very interesting the way you connected Naruto to the Bible. I like how he thinks about the consequences.
| ChasingProse 5/21/09 . chapter 14
This one was beautiful. I like the metaphor of coffee.
| ChasingProse 5/21/09 . chapter 13
The obligatory angst. This one is very good, and I like the passing mentions of what could have been.
| ChasingProse 5/21/09 . chapter 12
This one put a smile on my face. Well-written.