Cute story.

You know, I just got done with the spirit temple for the 50th time today and randomly decided to look up this coupling and I'm pleasantly surprised with your story. So far I'm really enjoying it.

The interaction b/w Nabooru and Link is cute and you explain things very nicely.

Wow, I never realized I liked Nabooru/Link so much until now. It's actually a very cute pairing! I guess ZeLink is just not the pairing I like.

Poor Link :(

Sorry, but the ending kind of disappointed me since Link sounds more like a slave than a lover.

Okay...

wow werd but cool. (lol)

Good development so far. I can't wait to see what happens next. :D

You're rushing.
That's not a good idea.
You should cut it out.

In 2 chapters (of about 670 words each) you have had Link and Nabooroo part ways, have Link spend seven years doing...something, you don't really tell us what, then live with Malon for a while and help her get her farm running, and finally (with the narrative grace of a celebrity autobiography) bolt off to the desert, meet Nabooroo again, and have them fall head-over-heels in love again.

Look, the idea of love-at-first-sight is nice and all, but that's no excuse to skip character development.

I really, really strongly recommend going back and trying to re-work the last two chapters so that a) it doesn't feel rushed and pay attention to all the things Link says he's thought and felt, but currently lack any real depiction and b) the backstory gets enough treatment that it feels like backstory and not a ten-second episode recap recited by some fast-talking ultra-caffeinated announcer.

It's an interesting story, and I'd like to read it, but you aren't really telling it to us so much as giving us bullet points.

Awesome pairing and awesome story, although I am curious about how everyone remembers Link if he goes back in time before he became the hero.

Great start. I love this pairing and look foreward to a lot more.

You Know ? I like this there aren't many Link/Nabooru stories so keep up the good work

This is..Very interesting... I'll alert this to see where you go with it.