LOL!

I can definitely relate to Liz! Not that I'd ever, EVER spend $450 for a pair of shoes (well, I did about 1/4 of it...), but still, I understand her DESIRE!

As Becky Bloomwood said: "What is it about shoes?" that we can't resist?

its good. a few spelling and grammar mistakes here and there but otherwise, it was amusing :D

read mine?

oh my gosh,, this is AMAZING :):)

i love it! haha x

don't stop

Wow. I absolutely loved the ending. It made me laugh so hard! That is the perfect ending to your story. Every scene made me smile. I loved the shopaholic series. It is the fastest series that I've ever read. You really should write more.

Nice beginning. I think it's so close to Becky, though, that you should just make it her.

A few mistakes here and there (it's suffocate, and there are some there/their/they're mix-ups) but overall the writing was sound and amusing to read.

Keep writing!

Hah, I loved that!

loved it :D written exactly like the author does in the shopaholic series.

I really like this, it really made me smile and you write in a very easy way for the reader to read :) you should update, maybe introduce a Luke-type character into the story lol