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Visitkarte
2009-05-01 . chapter 2
Oh, I love it where this one is going. I'll put it on alert. Thanks for writing and sharing it!
OneDayOneRoom
2009-04-20 . chapter 2
Very nice. I look forward for what's to come, and appreciate the fact that you're sticking to what could possibly happen in weeks to come on HOuse, please update soon :) loved it, thank you.
Hughlaurie4ever
2009-04-17 . chapter 2
OMG! KEEP WRITING! Make it so when he is discharged the hallucination makes him go up to the roof and he stands on the edge. and when cuddy gets up there can she be able to stop him on time?
kateandspencer
2009-04-17 . chapter 2
Good to see you writing stories again! This one's got a great start so far. Your writing is amazing, and I can't wait to read more. Thank you for sharing, Amy
fox4mel
2009-04-17 . chapter 2
Welcome back! I love reading your reviews over at Blogcritics, but I have really missed your stories.

I am really looking forward to the next chapter of this!
glicine
2009-04-16 . chapter 2
you updated it fast! yay!
A really good chapter...can't wait for more!
House24Fan
2009-04-16 . chapter 2
Great chapter! :)

I'm glad he told Cuddy about the hallucinations though of course, in typical House fashion, he still fudged the truth a bit. Hopefully Cuddy can help him...
Christina
2009-04-16 . chapter 2
This is a wonderful story so far! You do a very, very impressive job in capturing the subtleties of House. I can't wait for the next chapter! PS. I love your reviews over at "the end of the thought process." You're a very talented writer and House fans are lucky you apply your talent to this show!
Anon
2009-04-16 . chapter 1
Confused...never heard of a male Charlotte. Did you mean Charles?
leesa 1214
2009-04-16 . chapter 2
o It's getting very good already. Both Cuddy and House are in character and the story is moving along nicely. Even though your story is medically based and House understands that Amber is a hullucination it still has a creepy, scary undertone to it. I suppose that's because House is loosing him mind and that's scarier than the deadliest horrow story. Great job.
CSChick
2009-04-16 . chapter 2
You're braver than me. I won't touch something that is yet to come.

I don't think that they're going to go quite as far with the Amber storyline, so I enjoy seeing someone who is willing to do it. Nice story so far.
CuttingOnions
2009-04-16 . chapter 2
"I see dead people" made me lol :P

Oh, good think that he didn't said it to Wilson =/
leesa 1214
2009-04-16 . chapter 1
I was so happy to see the alert telling me you have written aonther House story. The begining looks very promising. I can't wait to read more.
Southpaw
2009-04-16 . chapter 1
interesting...

I love your between-the-lines stories, but I have to point out one thing in this chapter: the name of the patient at the top of the page doesn't jive with the description of the rest of the incident (male/female pronouns)

I do look forward to seeing where this goes, though!
gypsy71
2009-04-16 . chapter 1
Great to see you back here. I'll admit I've only skimmed this so far because I'm trying to stay spoiler (and spoiler-spec) free for the end of the season, but I know it'll be a good read for the summer holidays. Something to look forward to if I can keep my head in the sand for the next few weeks!
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