Bookmark. This story is really good so far!

Just read it hoping to see more.

this ending really depressed me...

damn...i actually cried on this chapter...*sigh* fate...stupid fate thing

yes! she's back! woot^^

oh damn it! memory loss, clique...but seem to devastating here...

aww man...kinda put a damper on the mood, with Sarah being destined to have a child. does this mean they don have a chance anymore...?

*thumb up* totally hot^^

just wish this kinda scene was in the other fic you wrote too, they still havent reach this level of intimacy yet in that fic

ok, totally AU...there are actually 2 AI now? interesting...

Not the happy end I have hoped for but a happy end after all. Nice that you included Charley into your story. I hope you will continue this AU.

Wonderful chapter. It is full of love and pain at the same time.

i just loved it! please continue soon!

Wow...you definitely pulled THAT surprised out of your hat, I must say! Cuz I was expecting Miles Dyson based on the scene of Miles and Sarah meeting in her Dad's office...but you really know how to pull the switcheroo, Red Hope :D

You definitely need to write a sequel, if only to help explain how Charley and Sarah met and the impact of what happened with Cameron on their relationship. Cuz what I took from how you ended Chapter 12 that Sarah's decision to fall in love with Cameron kinda made her ability to develop long-term relationship of a romantic nature rather weakened...Charley, I think, would be the right kind of guy to help Sarah cope, though I know Sarah would have to come up with a realistic alternative to what happened.

This entire story has been one of my favourite fanfics, and I have read quite a few of them, spanning numerous fandoms that have peaked my interest. Really, the only issue that comes to my mind over this series has been how you've referred to Sarah as "Sarah Jeanette Connor II" several time...not because I disagree with the choice of her middle name, but mainly due to my lack of experience with females getting referred to as Something the Second unless we're talking about royalty. That and the odd spelling goof/word choice (MS Word's AutoCorrect - if used - can lead to something interesting prose :D)

Ok...I have to get this out of the way right off the bat: YOU ROCK THE CASBAH AND THE SHARIF LIKES IT!

;)

Yes...I just blatantly stole from The Clash, but this chapter was the epitome of mind blowing, and I was honestly breaking down in tears with Sarah by the end. Though I do have to wonder how Sarah's gonna react when she sees Cameron supposedly attempted to rob the bank and "blew herself up" in the bank vault, if the TDE process is anything like how they showed it occurring in the first episode of TSCC, and the aftermath of Sarah, John and Cameron's excape from Cromartie. Honestly, between the Hot Lesbian Action (which was on the right side of descriptive for what you presumably were aiming for) and the dicussions about the future, I was in awe of just how well-crafted this chapter was. Can't wait for the Epilogue :D

Oddly, I dunno if I am 100% behind the idea of Cameron getting her memories back...or at least so soon, mind you. Not that I didn't want her to recover all that she's learnt over the last few (internal chronology) days that was lost when he primary chip was damaged...just not sure if it should be relatively instantaneous (i.e. less than a day), if only for dramatic purposes ;)

In any case, this was definitely an awesome chapter to read, Red Hope! Definitely loved the introspection about souls and Cameron's comments about how she's not sure where her emotions are coming from...all kinds of juicy character development there :D