I love this story and what a superb job you did with it.

I was hoping that there will be a sequel to it. I found it

fasinating. What's the back story to Rodney and Jeanie's

mother and these kids that seem to be popping up. I want to know more Great job and thank you for sharing.

Very fun. Wish there was more.

Good story.

Aw. The back story with the 'brothers' and whatever was a little confusing, but otherwise, a really great story. And the scene where Sheppard sees what has been happening to Rodney is really in character and, well, just fabulous.

Great story! I loved the plot, and the characterisations were spot on. And I also loved the insanity of McKay having brothers that he's only just finding out about! Also Deidre was great, as was the fact that Rodney managed to save himself by programming it to fry the man. And I loved the end, with Rodney actually being nice to Grant, and giving him praise instead of critism. I hope you write more stories like this in future!

Awesome! I love the Grant character, and the confrontation with Rodney is just great! Thanks!

That was awesome! So sweet and so exciting, I loved it! Thank you so much for sharing and please write more :)

That was cool! Good Rodney torture there :)

Wow! What a wonderful story. I really liked reading it. Rodney is my favourite, I have never seen Traders but I have heard about it, and from your description I can see it in my immagination. Well done. Now excuse me, I am going to read it again. :)