So much fluff... I love this its just to cute.

Hahaha, wow! It's hard to believe the person who wrote Marionnette could write something so fluffy and soft! But it's always good to write for multiple genres. :) Excellent job with this! Too cute.

Omg, you can never have too much fluff! Seriously this was so freaking adorable! I love picturing Axel and Roxas as little kids because it's just always so cute!

I love this! It;s so cute especially the way Roxas talks. I can see it and its just too cute. :3

-Celia the Pikachu

Hungwy?

Argh, the fluffy cuteness thingy just killed me...

you know, i can just see there future together... i love this story!

AW

kyah! This. is. so. CUTE! I can totally picture them doing this...-fluff overload-

MAD FLUFF. MAD CUTE.

AWW that was the cutest! im in luv!

So cute, fluffy, and AWESOME!

Wah, so cute and fluffy x3

aw!1 that was so cute! if i could make the cute and adorable face, i would. that was so freakin' cute!i loved it!

Aw that was realy cute & flufy 33

Aw cute XD

In reality preschoolers really aren't that easily embarrassed. They kiss each other like it's nothing and some even have kids they prefer to play with which they will call their boyfriend/girlfriend.

You did get most of their mannerism down right, although Axel had rather mature thoughts, and Roxas started out being able to pronounce "friend" right to having a speech impediment at the end, where he couldn't pronounce his "r"s. It was still a cute story though. Good job!