ps. this was one of the most romantic oneshots i have ever read.

with Sora, and Namine and Roxas...it was just, it makes me want to smile and watch the notebook or something :)

good job, really, it was awesome.
and i know this will sound cheesy, but i really wish a guy will love me someday, as much as Roxas loves Namine.
so yea, yay for the cheesy review, but oh well.
this was awesome.

thanks for writing it, peace! :)

OMG! yet another masterpiece but it would be better if u made the story longer...it left me thinking what could happened next?

This is amazing! I love it. And it totally fits the song (Thinking Of You). lol. I'm glad Nami stayed with Roxas. ^^ You can tell she cares about him, and she'll get over Sora eventually, right?

this was awsome but the sex scene could use some work

Oh wow!
That was amazingly sad.
And sweet.
And oh so very sad.

I'm not exactly a fan of Roxas x Namine but WOWZERS!
That was amazing!

Great Job!

dude it was awsome the scene needs a little work but it almost made me cry awsome story

It's really cute. I liked the way it turned out.

This was fantastic! =D I was supprised about Sora! Near the ending made me cry. This was a really fantastic story! =D

=P well there was too much sora in there for my liking, but i absolutely loved the ending xD

The sex scene was kinda exciting, lmao. To be serious, though, it was written well. It was very sensual and realistic-sounding.

The story was pretty good--I guess it would help if I knew the Kingdom Hearts characters better...Did Sora leave Namine for Kairi? o.O It only makes sense to me.

It was quite sad to me to see Namine sit there and lie to Roxas and treat him so badly for someone that didn't care much for her.

Whether she still thought she was in "love" with Sora or not, it was very unfair for her to string Roxas along. It would have been better for her to be alone than to be so unkind.

It was funny when Roxas threw the ring out-It kinda showed that money wasn't as important to him as Namine was. I like the positive ending where it says that renewal is possible. <3

Good story. It took me a while to get through it, cuz of many distractions at home...but one day, I wanna read all of the stuff you've posted.

Oh, wow! That was a really great oneshot! :D

Awh, poor Namine. She was deep in her emotions and feelings that she had to sort them out before she realized that her soulmate was right in front of her!

I'm really glad that Roxas stayed with Namine and kept his promise to Sora by trying his very best to make her happy. Roxi is such a sweet guy! ;)

You did a great job on the sex scence, it was really good! Haha, that sounded perverted! XD

I'm really glad Namine got her happy ending!
Again, you did a great job on the story! ^^

Wow, that was amazing! I just loved it!
He was right in front of her the entire time..
How sweet..
and the fact that Roxas stuck with her..
too cute...
good job!

Um...that sex scene was AWSHOME! LOL but yeah, this story wasn't bad at all and it's not like i was expecting it to be. reading is just not my forte. i really did enjoy this.

WOW! 0.0

Ahem...yeah...Roxas is one DIRTY boy! LOL...seriously though...great job for a one shot. Poor Nami...apprently she really had to sort out her feelings before she realized that the right guy for her was right in front of her the whole time!

Once again, great job! As for the...*ahem* scene...yeah...you can write them like the best Romance novel authors out there...Nora Roberts, eat your heart out!! LOL...I seriously did not know you even had it in you girl! XD

-NightRaven13 (=^.^=)

aw this was so cute