lol! awesome job

Marie

can u make this more than a oneshot

I liked this story:))

Absolutely adorable. I loved the progression of feelings through the story. It was very well-written and a pleasure to read.

So...very... beautiful! I'm sure that's already been told but hey, it's totally true! *sniffs* Really good job! You should write more!

I love the ending :) aw

this took my breath away...i completely loved every word from this. Thanks for writing such a precious piece!

It was a really nice and well-written story! Thank you, I really enjoyed it:)

Instead of just basically making a list why don't you take one or two of the situations and writing them into a story.

Mary

The last sentence was, IMO, absolutely perfect! Very well done, and a neat idea! :)

Auh. That was adorable. I absolutely loved it. (Wrapped, btw, you put warped.)
Gosh I want to read more of this now. :D I loved it!
Elodie~

Wow, I love this!
Great job!

I like this. It's a nice insight to her relationship with Jane. I'd love to see you do this from Jane's POV. I think it would be interesting.

This was great. It was sweet and cute, and well written for someone who has English for a second language! Well done, I loved this :D

That was great! Hopefully there will be more Jisbon firsts!