Update soon)

still reading... still enjoying...

glad you are back!

Great chapter, love it!

Poor, Edward.

Glad to see you back! xo

I love the poetry inserts - the cadence of poetry is relaxing and perfect for the story!

i just have a feeling that something bad is going to happen while bella is away from him...

(now i don't know weather or not something bad is going to happen or not it's just a hunch i have)

i hope you post again soon i absouletly love this story:)

So over the course of the last two or three days, I have positively DEVOURED "the woods..." freakin amazing. I mean...just, wow.

I feel the whole, real life bending you over and having its way with you. Sucks! But, know that I'll be here, anxiously awaiting the next chapter. As loooong as it may take. :)

What a lovely surprise to hear from you and your human Edward and Bella in this supernatural story. I sure hope Bella and Angela are safe at the memorial service and that no undead show up... well other than the Cullens. They are allowed. I just realized that they will probably be there. This should be even more interesting than I thought... the service I mean. Eddie will be all alone at the Inn too so I hope nothing happens to him there either. I imagine the Vampires stole her clothes, but from where... from her room at the Inn, or her car, or from where? If James and his friends got them from the Inn then they would know they are staying there... but doesn't he know this already? I can't quite remember who exactly killed Edward's family and only James has met Bella. I am not sure if the Vampires who killed Edward's family want to find him or not? I remember most of this story, although some of the details are foggy including Jacob's involvement. I know he rescued her from James on the beach... but was anyone else there? Thanks for the little bits of information you add to jog our memory, it helps. I do love this story, but I'm afraid I don't have time right now to go back, but I will probably re-read it once it is complete.

Sorry to hear that parts of your Real Life kicked you pretty hard. Glad you are on the mend now and back doing something you really enjoy and are really good at too. Best of luck with your schooling too. Cheers to a great summer for you and for all of us. Til next time and thanks.

I just started reding this story today and I must say that I am thoroughly enjoying it! My curiosity grows with each chapter as to what is going on with Edward, but that just adds to the enjoyment... And um, I think I almost died when I read this... "Crabs got your snatch?" ... I laughed so hard my roommate thought something was wrong with me!

-R.G

I Love this chapter, poor Edward always suffering T_T. Saying that I hope you get a job, don't eat all your food and meet a boy who loves you very very much.

Eve

Hello my sweet girl

So good to have you back, I missed you so much. Still so much mystery here and I can't wait for more of it to be revealed. So sad about Mr Miller. I wonder if Bella will discover some more things about him at the memorial.

Poor sick Edward, I just want to put on my 'naughty nurse' outfit and go over there and make him feel better.

Hugs

Annette

Well...welcome back! So sorry to hear of your rough time. (Boys suck.) I'm sure he didn't deserve you. Hope you're doing better now.

It has been a while and some details of this story are a bit fuzzy for me. I did pick up on what I think are some foreshadowing/clues to what's coming up. Like where did Bella's jacket go? The idea that Edward is still dealing with a high fever (unusual/potentially deadly in adults.) The circumstances surrounding Mr. Miller's death/murder, the mass exodus form town (as if the people know something...) My theory is that we will learn about those damn vamps soon. Hmmm...

Just wondering how this process works for you. Did you have a rough outline of the whole story (including introduction of the vamps) at the very beginning? I know some authors write as they go. Do these characters "speak" to you as some authors say? Since it can be quite a long gap b/t postings, is it that you're able to put the whole story out of your head space until you decide to dive in again? Very curious. Many authors will admit to a story "haunting" them-just begging to be written/shared.

I have always thought this story was intriguing, original and well-written. You have a respectable amount of reviews for a WIP as long as this. Hope that gives you encouragement to finish this great piece that you started.

glad to see you back. Sorry about the heartbreak, boys suck, except Edward, of course. Looking forward to next chapter.

Thank you so much for the update, and I'm sorry about your broken heart. :(

Yaaaayyyy thank you for updating! Next chapter is going to be a rough one but maybe Bella will get some clues about mr miller? Poor sick Edward I have the flu too so I feel for him.