way to go!

GREAT!
Please updade! ^^

interesting.. very difenrent i like it.. i will keep reading ^^

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add!

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O add more!

I totally agree, I am tired of seeing Vegeta as the prince and Bulma as the slave. I also love your story!

Yay! update! I really like the flow of the story.

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Oh add!

oh you are so mean... A cliffy like THIS while I have to go away for two weeks.. Not fair.. But still, nice story!^^
haha, I hope you update soon, even though Im probably not gonna be able to read it right away:P
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Like the title:P

~ACV

WOOT go bluma!

*two thumbs up*

Didn't I just read something from? LOL

Frieza as Bulma's father, that's rare! Your style is very bold and fresh. I must admit, I wasn't going to read this at first, but you captured my interest. Now,I'm going to continue.

this whole hiding identity ploy is gonna back fire on her, isn't it.

I really enjoy your twist on the DBZ universe. I'm excited to see what you come up with as the plot progresses.

you are right about the saiyan spelling thing i've seen it spelt that wway many times before. i just wanted to ask why. love the story