Hey, good to see you back. Hehe, I’ve read several fanfics that begin scenes by telling the time. The times are usually very specific and have no influence on the plot. So whether or not you intended to make fun of this trend, my hat’s off to you.

All through this story I was torn between chuckling and grimacing, because it was so absurd yet painful.

A worthwhile read with chuckles. Good to see quality fiction so long after the series has ended.

Well, the one good thing you can say about this version of Dib--I bet Zim ain't takin' over Earth with _him_ on the defensive. :-\

And as usual, you manage to make a good point here; no one would tolerate some of Gaz's more extreme threats and actions if they were done to Membrane, or just about anybody else. So, this made your point well. Nice work.

Yeah, the reason WHY Gaz treats Dib the way she does is something that people have questioned over and over. I've done it myself.

I thoroughly enjoy reading your stories in which Gaz gets what she deserves...in which she stops being a Karma Houdini and finally gets the good kick in the pants that we'd all like to give her. XD