 floutistvivi 2009-11-27 . chapter 10wait im confuzed. wtf is going on in this world of squall's!? |
 floutistvivi 2009-11-27 . chapter 9i would have had no idea that someone could make seifer act so nice to poor squall. great job! |
 floutistvivi 2009-11-26 . chapter 1havent read it yet but im tired its almost midnight and the words are blurring! im not drunk! anyways ill read it tommorow and then review. yea i know i spelled the first tomorrow wrong and maybe some other things! |
 AngelsThanatos93 2009-11-20 . chapter 10hey its been a while
well im just happy your still goin
now im worried about what the president was saying cause to be honest ...the suspense is KILLING ME! lol |
 Sorceress Rinoa Heartilly 2009-11-16 . chapter 10Hiya! It was very good chapter! i like it! I'm glad Rinoa saw the people that want them to stay... But I'm worried of what the president said...It's very interesting and don't worry about that you update late, it's good to see another chapter of your story, I hope to see the next chapters, so good luck and see ya!
-Sorceress Rinoa Heartilly-
*No one can predict the future...* |
 wais101 2009-11-16 . chapter 10YAY new chapter
its great to see them fighting back AND a new battle thats about to start
but err i think u have just a few mistakes you made in the story
example:
Sir, our plan to retrieve the original specimen for our experiment |
 Sorceress Rinoa Heartilly 2009-09-25 . chapter 9Woops... Hiya! Sorry, I read this story and I love it, I read it in 28-8-09, but I forgot to make a review, I putted the story in alert... So hurry up, I wanna see your next chapter, good luck and see ya!
-Soreceress Rinoa Heratilly-
*No one can predict the future...* |
 AngelsThanatos93 2009-08-30 . chapter 9uh-oh
i think when squall decided to demote himself
that was a bad idea
but i liked the fact that seifer helped him out
but anyways awesome chapter i can wait for the plot to unravel |
 wais101 2009-08-29 . chapter 9that was fast! lol
so glad the new chapter is up
i rly like how seifer fought for squall and rinoa
though im guessing something rly bad is gona happen in the next chapter or so
oh btw
my first "test chapter" for my story is up
i had some trouble since microsoft word wasnt working
but i got it published and im going to get the final copy done pretty soon
the chapter is sorta like an epilogue in which rinoa is actually in Esthar where she is training to control her powers
though i rly didnt mention it cause throughout the story theres going to be honts here and there of what happened right after Ultimecia was defeated
its called
FFVII : Forgotten Apocalypse
...might change the title though |
 Skykhanhunter 2009-08-28 . chapter 9Totally read my mind on the the gunbladers rivalry there. Anyway, glad to see that Seifer knocked some sense back into the Commander. Looking forward to the next chapter.
regards Skykhanhunter |
 DaughterOfSorceress-Lion 2009-08-27 . chapter 9Hm... So Seifer can kick some sense into Squall without using his Gunblade... hehehe, I don't know why, but I find that kind of funny. And I do agree with you, though after Seifer kind of shoved Rinoa towards ugly Adel, whether one beleives that he was possessed or not, I think Squall probably would have had less... I don't know, but wouldn't be so agreeable to him at times I guess... Regardless, good to see that as Always Squall takes ** from Seifer he won't take from anyone else... I don't remember where I read that, but someone wrote something similar to that sentence... I'm going to stop rambling now... Update Soon! :) |
 AngelsThanatos93 2009-08-24 . chapter 1o the drama
oh wow so its just gona be Rinoa and Squall against galbadia
...that doesnot sound good. But entertaining! lol
very nice chapter |
 wais101 2009-08-21 . chapter 8Hey. bad news for some reason my story [which i mentioned yours] got deleted :[
but im actually starting that other ff8 story i talked about weeks ago and i think im almost done with the first chapter
im rly excited
now back to u:
great chapter though it was a bit short i still loved it
man why does everybody gotta hate on rinoa? lol
ill definately keep myself update for the next chapter |
 Acme90210 2009-08-21 . chapter 8YAY!
another chapter
aw poor squall and rinoa i hope zell and the others would be on their side :[
Still, im hoping to see who are those 2 bad guys in the story
cant wait for the rest !
...im a tad hyper |
 chrisVIII 2009-08-18 . chapter 8Excellent ! oh the drama ! really nice writing, you deal with the problem in a clever and interesting way, I'm curious to read the rest and to see who will side with Squall and Linoa. Who will replace him etc... I have many question in my head and I'll love reading the answers in the future chapters :) |