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Gaz is the LEAST character that is made fun of on here! And you my good friend made her seem helpless and cowardly! Well done!

P.S I read your profile before I read this.

I like how a lot of your fics are like episodes of The Twiligt Zone. :)

I have to admit I suspected Gaz was dreaming about Dib eating her pizza when I read “That mouth relentlessly bit again and again into the warm desirable essence of what belonged only to her.” I think I just know you well by now. Still, it’s pretty amusing that this is her worst nightmare. And yet it makes perfect sense.

Wow... just wow, hard to believe that Gaz would be afraid of something so... common.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.

In a twisted way, this actually makes sense...the thought of being powerless, and of someone (especially Dib) being able to have ANYTHING that she couldn't probably WOULD be Gaz's worst nightmare. Plus, you know...pizza is yummy.

Nice work!

FINALLY! Oh, well worth the wait. You really are good at what you write, you know that? This isn't what I was expecting, but it was still good. My original fic did all this fancy, reality-shifting dream stuff, but your version is simpler and to-the-point. I can really see the meaning of that quote from '1984' you mentioned at the end... the simplest things in the world are sometimes the scariest.
Keep up the good work.
Zim'sMostLoyalServant signing off.

Oh my GOD...being frightened of Dib taking the last slice of pizza? That's ridiculously hilarious AND brilliant! Yeah, ZimsMostLoyalServant has some brilliant ideas alright, just like you.

Sincerely...

Nick