I guess you aren't finishing this story ?:(( I'm really liking it.

Whats happening with it , have you decided?

Thanks

-M

cool

THIS STORY FUCKING SUCKS AND IDK Y ANY1 WUD EVA READ IT BC IT SUX BOYS ND GIRLS LAX IS NUTIN ALIKE AND U CNT PLAY CO ED YOU DIPSHIT

awesome. i can c alice as a goalie against emmett. funny cool story update soon :)

I really like your story so far, I hope you write more!

id be a pity if u didnt finish this story...

GREAT SO FAR...UPDATE SOON!

Okay. That was really good. But I know nothing about lacrosse. Can you explain all positions, the point of the game, and how it is played? Cause I think I'll like the story a lot more if I actually understand that much. . . Great job! Can't wait to read more! ;)

CullenLover13

k im not really into lacross but i think ill like this story ALOT! keep up the good work and update soon )

-ohsokayx

O, Edward and Bella really connected with eachother!

Great Chapter, can't wait for the rest!

xoxo Natyy :)

I like it! Edward sounds sexier than usual. *sigh*

And I do not know a thing about lacrosse. It isn't that big a sport in England I think. But if you look hard enough you'll find somewhere that does it. Like archery I guess.