This is good except your sentances kept breaking into different paragraphs.

good story

are you going to continue?

please do.

Very nice. I liked this. :)

I never really thought about a chance of getting the bends from coming up too fast in that episode. I loved the interaction between Sam and Jack.

Very good.

Very cute, and very them.

I liked this ... enough I wish it could have been a little longer.

Very cute and touching!

Woot! I so love this story. Now, hm... prequel? Huh? - C