Daww, Adam is so damn... angry!
But we all like it of course! Please hurry and add the next chapter, please! =)

LOL! Adam, you're such an a*shole, telling Lawrence he can f*ck his sister and maid. Even someone as stupid as you, the guy who has to cheat on his tests, should know by now that Lawrence likes guys, just like you do. It's pretty obvious. ^_^ But Adam's stupidity aside, this was a really cute chapter! I loved how Lawrence was so baffled and jealous of Adam's richness, and then Adam got all angry and said that being rich isn't worth it if you're not loved. AW! Poor Adam and Lawrence. They both have such crappy lives, which is awesome, because it leaves them open for adorable hurt-and-comfort later. I also found it really adorable how Adam had to climb onto a counter to reach the top of the fridge while searching for the first-aid kit. AW! He's such a shortie! Even adult Adam/Whannell is, like, a full head shorter than Lawrence/Elwes. That'd make standing-up-kissing really awkward. <3

AW! Why did Lawrence listen to Adam when he told him to leave? He should have stayed and forced more of his emotions out. I mean, if Adam would invite Lawrence into his house and open up himself like that, he's certainly up to opening himself in the literal sense and engaging in some hot antics with Lawrence in his bedroom. /Immature. XD But aw, this chapter was so cute! Lawrence was all baffled by Adam's wealth, and then he and Adam were all arguing about which one of them has it worse! Those two are whiny b*tches at the best of times, but when they're hormonal teenagers, how much worse are they? XD Well, at least Adam has left himself open (in more ways than one... Okay, I'll shut up now), so Lawrence can confront him again in a chapter or two and force more emotions out of him. AW! It'll be so cute and aggressive! ^_^

AW! Wound-tending! That is so CUTE! I love writing that, too. XD Adam was tending to Lawrence's wounds! I mean, sure, Adam caused them, but it was still sweet. But then he had to ruin it by kicking Lawrence out. Damn it, Adam! Couldn't you have asked Lawrence to have s*x with you, instead? Don't you think that would have been more beneficial? Not that I'd expect much from a moron who has to cheat on his tests, but still! And Adam is such a tease about Lawrence's non-existent desire to have a threesome with his sister and maid. Lawrence is more gay than Elton John, Adam! So are you, actually. Idiot. Ah, well. Now that Adam has had that big blow-out session, and Lawrence has had a smaller one himself, they'll probably bond some more before long. They know so much about each other now, after all. ^_^

I like this fic more and more... now they don't get along but at least they don't dispice eachother anymore... and stella, no matter what you say we both know that eventually they will love eachother, maybe in this fic for the first time not in love but they will still love eachother ;)

Wah! Why can't they just be friends?! Why can't they just f*ck?! Why can't they just BE HAPPY?! *screams in mental agony* Adam is so... annoying in this fic. He wants to punch Lawrence in the face, I wanna punch him in the nuts. Little, ridiculously smexy bastard... Nice chapter, btw! ^.^

this story actually reminds me of me and my former best friend, elisa. we hated eachother when we were like 5 or something. and than 2 years later we became friends. she teased me so I kind of was Lawrence and she Adam. (I'm always Lawrence, I am a lot like him...) and right now after all these years when we're talking about that she still says sorry for when she teased me.
I'm really happy that they finally became friends, it's going to be awesome when they all of a sudden seem to get along and the teachers think there is soemthing wrong with them... that's going to be funny to read. but now they'll realise that they actually fit together and that that's why they hated eachother in the beginning.
by the way, Stella, I have started a new Mister B. gone sequal because I thought about a better story and stuff but maybe I wanna post it on fanfiction, first of all do you think I should do that or not ? and second how do I do that ? cause there is no place for Mister B. gone fics yet...

Good GOD, that was hot! Well, not so much hot as adorable. Very, very adorable. ^_^ Adam really is a nice guy, even though he tries to hide it! He invites Lawrence over to his house for s*x! ...I mean, to tend to his wounds (that he caused XD). Aw, you're so nice, Adam! I love it when Lawrence broke down like that! He was almost crying! And how Adam ran up to him before that, demanding attention like the adorable little wh*re that he is. Too bad Lawrence didn't cry. Adam could have huggled him and COMFORTED him. But I guess their angsty, hormonal relationship should be taken slowly, like you're doing. ^_^ It starts out with Adam inviting Lawrence over to his house, and it eventually ends with those two lying spent and naked together in a bed. ;)

OMG! That was adorable! Adam is NICE to Lawrence now, and he asks him about the injury! Sure, Adam was the one who injured him in that conveniently off-screen wrestling match in the bathroom that we all know turned into a heavy make-out session, but still! It's sweet of Adam to ask, and to offer to "patch him up" (AW! So gruff! ^_^). I do feel a bit sorry for Wendy, though. Lawrence may think he loves her, but obviously, he's going to reconsider when he sees how hot Adam looks as an adorable rich boy who hates his mom just as much as Lawrence hates his. But maybe Lawrence will give her a future. He wants to do that for her, just like he does with his siblings. And in the meantime, he and Adam can have hot, experimental teenage s*x. <3

AW! That was so CUTE! Adam stopped quipping when he realized how crappy Lawrence's life is, and he offered to patch him up! AW! Patch! XD I wonder how Lawrence will react when he sees what an adorable rich boy Adam is? Will they fight over it in a "you don't know how good you have it" scenario, or will they connect because they both are unable to fit in? Maybe both? Aw! And then Wendy will probably get heartbroken, and maybe become a hooker. Sure, that's sad, but... Meh. Adam and Lawrence are made for each other, and she'll just have to accept that. ^_^

that was good. but you need to work on the scary and the gory more this is a saw movie your righting about
but besides that it was good

Tee hee.
Nothing else to say.
Tee hee.

Ah I love them. I really do. And I love you. And I hate myself for not writing to you. Now I'm off to cut myself with some toilet paper.
But seriously, I know that I promised to write. And I will.

It pains me to read your stories.. They're so well written.. Where's the toilet paper?

Aww! Lawrence finally snapped! (A tiny sidenote: I had a a freakout like that today...) Angry teenagers are so cute, for some reason ^^ Hell, Adam and Lawrence are always cute. Especially when Adam gets all caring and "let's-go-patch-you-up"-ish. I've had a migraine for a couple of hours, my friends are annoying and so is my sister, but your writing always brightens my day <3 :p

Aw! Adam messes up his clothes and bag, because he doesn't want people to know he's a rich boy! And Lawrence tries to be all neat and prim, because he doesn't want people to know he's poor! Those two are so insecure! And I love how they get into another fight! That'll never get old! XD Besides, love-hate relationships are always adorable, and the more fights these two get into, the more wounds they'll have to tend to when they finally do become tender with each other! Aw! And poor Adam... He really hates his family. And Lawrence, too. Well, they both hate their moms, at least, and Adam hates his sister. Poor things... They need lots of sex. That'll make them feel better. Probably. <3

AW! Adam is such a little b*stard, it's ADORABLE! And Lawrence grabs his shoulder and says he wants to talk to him, and Adam just quips and quips, because that's what he does! I still find it hilarious that each think the other is the opposite of what they really are, IE rich and poor. They're so stupid! But AW! They got into a fight again! That's so CUTE! Adam and Lawrence just can't contain their adorable teenage hormones, can they? Although, I'll be looking forward to when those hormones work in a more... SEXUAL way. ^_^