Very nice...I almost forgot that Lily was going to tear him a new one for the way he treated her son, Harry. ;-D

I'm always conflicted when thinking about Snape and Dumbledore, as I honestly think (deep down) that they deserved to be punished for their actions in life.

Thanks for sharing, I liked your story.

KUTGW,

Noreen

Lovely.

my god I want to cry...

That was beautiful! it made me cry! Thank you so much for writing it!

Aww... So CUTE!

Do another!

Oh wow!

You write so beautifully

This is a nice, touching piece. However, you did confuse me with the key names that you used. Not to be picky, but I don't think Harry's mom's middle name would have been Luna. (As far as I know, JKR never identifies her middle name...not even on her tombstone.) I was under the impression that Harry and Ginny chose that as their daughter's middle name to honor their friend Luna Lovegood. I would think you should lise this as a Lily Evans P. story

Love the imagery- and I bet Severus refuses to think it, but I kept fearing James would slam dunk him just when he's gotten comfy.

Great writing!

Even if "Lily" is only an angel in disguise to comfort him, this is very good. He's never really been home before this, not really.

Nicely written.

Yes, I think it could be like that - I certainly wish it for Snape, after so much suffering.

That was beautiful. Few writers have the ability to add such intricate details and still allow the story to flow smoothly. You're one of those writers. Excellent! :)

Oh my ... so sweet. It feels just right. He definitely deserves this happy-end, being with the one he loves and so on. Even if she might still not love him back. But does that really matter in a world like this, where no pain seems to exist? I hope it doesn't...

I am glad Severus gets a happy ending afterall. Thank you for sharing. I thought it was a very sweet piece.

Very sweet! Thank you.