Whitem you old softy you. I did like this one better. However both are good stories. Keep both up.
Anyway now you have a plausable excuse for Warhok to come to Earth to have his can kicked by Ron.

Thanks,

Larry (Sentinel103)

Compact and intense your short story begs the following questions“What really makes a short story a good one? What must it have for a reader to want to keep reading?
Most readers want to read about a character that they feel they can relate to. Readers also want to finish the story feeling as though they were left with a message, a powerful theme. This little tale does all that.

You also capture our imagination and make us feel alive, as if we are intimately involved in the scene along with the characters. Your short story does this well and the Reader knows the quality of the story by your ability to put us there.

And yet you could have taken it so much further. You could have expanded on the perceived relationship of Shego and Kim and why Shego feels the way she does about Kimmy. In the future think about expanding the concept like you did in “The Power of Ron”. That was an amazing story and demonstrated your true abilities as a writer.

Thanks for the read. Dad and I enjoyed it a whole lot.

kt

I liked how this story worked out. I won't say what happened as I don't want to spoil within the review, but I'll say I was satisfied. Keep up the great work!

HA HA Shego cares for Kim, Shego cares for Kim, Shego cares fot Kim!

Invader Johnny Signing Off.

I can see Shego respecting Kim to the point that she would weep for her apparent death. What use is a good villain without a really good hero to oppose them? I mean Shego has all the advantages and she never can beat Kim. That’s gotta torque her off some.

Yeah, I like this ending better. I always like the happy ending where she goes back to Ron and they can walk off into the sunset like they did in “Mad Dogs and Aliens.”

Hey White M,

Another great job.

I liked this one better as it showed how smart Kim is, and that she had survived the attack of Warmonga.

Very nice work,

God Bless,

Larry

I've gotta say that I like the happier ending to this story versus the other version.

Very well written and believable.

Eh it's completely understandable every once in a while there needs to be a happy ending. Theres enough sad ones out there.

Like the reference to 'Amok Time'.

The ending was very funny and I completely understand why you would want to go on.

Interesting little alteration to your original post on this storyline.

Shego, showing two conflicting emotions about her adversary, gets back to the matter at hand: getting Drakken for abandoning her for Warmonga.

Some 'fire' added to what she inflicted on the alien murderess for taking out Kimmie, Shego gets her 'Dirty Harry' moment.

CB73