salut, bonne fic

This one was sweetly written and I also liked the twist of writing what time it was! It gave the fanfiction a good effect Loved it. R.M.L

Well, what gorgeous, feel-good fluff it is! This is definitely the cute, sappy side of Gravitation at its best.)

Very cute)

Aww! Adorable! I love how you made it like a timeline. And- aww. So cute! 3

Wow. I didn't look for Y/S fic because, really, I thought the manga had all I ever wanted, but I thought a rec would be nice so I found this. And I *like* it. A lot. Especially "But now he was rather like a man who had prepared himself to walk into a gale and instead encountered no resistance. He stumbled." that line, because it seemed to fic and explain so much very nicely. And how the entire thing just sort of encompased a moment a nice moment, where their feelings were there, not sappy, but still sweet.

i loved this'If Yuki wasn't braced for it the exuberance would flatten him. But now he was rather like a man who had prepared himself to walk into a gale and instead encountered no resistance. He stumbled.
great metaphor there, and i loved the sweetness of this fic thank you for writing it! you are extremely talented

Oh, the fluff... gotta love the fluff. Gravitation syle. :3

Sap is good... especially after AP exams.)

Aww sweet! Fluff but not too oddly Yuki! Loved the whole worrying by Yuki though. He does need to care a bit more! I'd love to see a photo like that! That line about the media was great! Hehe, did he always look like this? Nice passing of time and a great aniversary. Course its the hidden lemon afterwards though that makes things sweet of course *cough* _ Write more Gravi!

I respectfully disagree with the "cliche" label you gave this one. Sure, a plot may have been done to death several times over, but IMHO, it isn't a cliche if it's done well enough that you don't even notice, much less care. This is as far from the "boring" label slapped on truly cliche works.

What really made this story click for me was all the little details the sharply funny time montage at the beginning, the missing cigarettes, the orange juice, the expression... that made it seem *real*, a peek into another day of our favorite couple.

God, it's hard trying to detail exactly *why* you like a story so immensely, especially a simple yet delightfully enjoyable one like this. Characterization? Dead-on. Premise? Overused, but done wonderfully here with sparkling diction. The ending? Oh so perfect and subtle. Humor? Subtle yet obvious enough to leave me with constant smiles and snickers.

This story does everything right. My only complaint is that it's TOO SHORT;_;), but such are lovely little morsels that wouldn't be the same if they were stretched out to meals.

Loved, loved your story to death. That's all I have to say.

I have an insatiable sweet tooth for this sort of sap!*giggle* Just adorable, I loved it!

Lovely.

Absolutely lovely.

Just Jill

Really really lovely Yuki and Shuichi story. Sweet love.

XD! You are so teh cool. I love this line... /No, he was definitely never going to leave his house again. At least not with Shuichi./ lmao...you have the characterizations nailed, which is difficult in this fandom. It's sappy, but it's Gravi-style sap, so it's perfect. So going on my favorites list.