Parting may be such sweet sorrow, but poor Hermione and Fluer, reunion is even greater in its bitter bliss.

You do the angst so well!

"Her body that was still reacting to but the mere vestiges of Fleur’s voice and touch and smile and scent was telling her that she was deeply, deeply in love – scarred, marred and barred by it, even. Logic, feelings; metaphysical, sexual; there were too many conflicting, merging, fighting thoughts and feelings."

This paragraph conveyed some bold feelings (but mostly, I liked how it just sounded so pretty, pretty as a poem).

Good God this one is one of the most angst filled story I have ever read. Vertigo and Scowl and Sneer may very well challenge Forever Knight as the best HP fanfiction out there.

well this is definitely different. again my compliments on the angst. Oh an talk about being your own worst enemy. You took that to a whole new level. I liked the philosophy references. I normally have difficulty with stories that go a rather dire and dreadful direction, but yours is done with poise, and grace and just minute amount of hope. False hope though it may be, its still there. Excellent character development and portrayal of what mental and emotional stress of that level can do to a person no matter how strong their convictions. Great piece. I look forward to reading the next one, dark though it will be I am interested to see how it will turn out. You have twists, keep them coming. Predictable stories are good, but twists keep things interesting.

Very Nice Story!! I really enjoyed reading it!

Wow, this story was PRETTY intense. Not as bad as some of your other stories but still, nontheless... intense. I knew in the last story that damned kiss would start problems, oh well, I guess you wouldn't have a story without the reader having some kind of strange insight that the character doesn't, making their problems all the more real to us.. hm I am rambling, anywho... great story. Can't wait for the next one to really take off.

What... um... I... this is... ok, you've absolutely without a doubt made me speechless, have you ever considered making a book? you would seriously turn into a best seller! I heard the themes I've looked at the pictures that you based your scenarios on and I CAN see them, that usually never happens to me! WOW! the only thing though, I still have trouble picturing Fleur like that... guess eventually, LOVED BOTH your "Vertigo" stories so far and I can hardly wait for more of the third, I could barely could get off my computer to go to class, I could feel the love between those two, I really could...great job!

Good chapter! Looks like somebody is sexually deprived, XP. Kinda sad how everyone is either dead, dying, or losing their free-will.

that was amazing hehe tho i wudv liked more detail when it was fleur's turn to pleasure hermione :D sry, im a lil dirty minded. well actually a lot. dont mind me.
ANYWAY... at first i was lik '...what?! its over?!' but then i re-thought it out and it did seem an apropriate place to stop. i thought the part of chanel's condition was very interesting mm im wondering wat exactly will happen to her m n i was wondering wat exactly did u do to vertigo bc it says it was updated. anyway yea...
AWESUM ending to wat i knows gna b an awesum triology mm jus cant wait for the last installment. ill b re-reading CC in my spare time since i jus got out of college for the year n am waiting to start wrking. in the mean time... good luck for the remainder of ur semester n keep it up! :D

OH MY GOD I can't wait for the next chapter! I love the whole set up you have going on here, its pure drama and confusion for me, and I love it!! Can't wait for the next update, and can you please not have Ginny die, I like that character! But its only a request I'll still read if she dies.

Love,
Rajuu

I was super confused...until the end. =/

*go back to re-read the chappy*

So Chanel's not the evil person here; lol, for a moment, I thought she was. The previous chapters made me think tht way =/ But glad everything's pretty much cleared up =)

I am kind of surprised that she's an Inferi though; I thought they have basically no ability to think and act for themselves, so it kind of surprises me that she still has a clear state of mind, and is able to resist Voldie xD But that's good xD Muahaha. Can't wait to see Voldie defeated. FOREVER.

The ideas and the plot for the story is really unique and fanta-bulous xD And I applaud you for that =) Thanks for the great chap=)

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I was getting uber confused, and just about threw that freaking strap on at chanel because I needed to vent...But then I find out Chanel is good and BLAH!

You're commentary helped though...I get it now. (I hope?) :D

Let me see if Ive got it:

Fleur was possesed by Voldy in Vertigo when Fleur saved Hermione at the Ministry. Voldemort was drawn out years later by extreme emotion (HERMIONE!) and Delamort was born. Delamort kills Bellatrix and Lucius, turns them into inferi and sends them into the veil. Hermione pops in however, they duel, and end up kissing, Delamort effectively transmitting the "seed" to Hermione, offering her immunity to extreme temperatures. Fleur loses the duel. They freeze Fleur to cleanse her of Voldy, but that didnt work. Voldemort is still inside Fleur, dominating and controlling her thoughts (at least a little) and Fleur wants revenge on the world. She wants to live eternally frozen with Hermione. This is only possible if Hermione is infected even more with the seed (ENTER MAGIC STRAP ON!) Problem is Fleur is having doubts and fears. Chanel is killed and turned into an inferi later on (dont get that part)and her job will be to later go into the veil, gather an inferi army and come back out to help Fleur and Hermione fight against...something. But Chanel has some dream that Fleur wants to help her with and has now tossed herself into the veil. Which I dont get but whatever.

Hmm. Voldy is a kinky freak isnt he..? Or is that Fleur? Voldemort's freakiness and Fleurs sexuality = kinkiness. ICK. Its not voldemort's..."seed" is it? I dont like him. Voldemort should just go drown in that inferi lake from Half-Blood Prince. Im rambling again. Sorry :x

Hey,

I do like where this is going - Fleur has always intrigued me to no end - even tho i tend to be more like Hermione. I wouldn't worry about the slow down of reviews - it seems to be a common case in all of fanfic at the moment. Blame spring.

More development, now with a ring. I'm anxious to see where this will go.

O progress! I'll read Ch 5 later but I'm enjoying the development.