Aw cute!

yes you deserve a review XD its very cute ^-^ i liked it

heheh it's cute, sweet... I love it ^^

Swell ^_^

it's sappy fluff but I love sap !

It was cavity inducing sweet. There were a few grammatical errors that tried to distract me but other then that, the only advice I could give is more.

i like how ranma handles her.

So cute and waffy and still in character =)

First of all, this is too short. Fifteen paragraphs, none of them longer than two lines... way too short. Put in more description; as it appears this is from Ranma's point of view, continue to describe from Ranma's perspective. Describe his view of Akane's manipulations as she tries to look over her body in the opening; when Akane asks later, show Ranma's genuine perspective as he gives Akane a once-over.

Second... a fun idea. What's one VERY good reason why wives have weight gain? :) Just a thought as to how this could be expanded...

Kawaii. It was worth the repeated writing.

Lots and lots of fluff, but why is she gaining weight, isn't she still going to the Dojo?