Wow. That was so in character and so believable. Lovely work!

Excellent! Wonderful characterization and exploration, truly, bravo. Good grammar and spelling, of nice length, plot itself nothing exceptional being more or less canon, but that was not truly the point of the fic. Rather, the interaction was; and very interesting interaction indeed. Not enough nonromantic Mohinder / Sylar fiction.

I like it. Very intense. The flashback/retrospective seemed to add and detract, though. It was a clever device, but at the same time, it made it feel... I don't know... fractured, and the emotional intensity lost something because of this.

But it's still amazing. Was it just me, or did you intend to write it with very subtle implied Mylar in there? I thought I picked up on that, but... I could be wrong.