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Rein-kun
2009-10-15 . chapter 1
...You're going to teach me how to do a one shot and you are going to like it DX.

Finally i found you. @_@ now i get to tag you *tagz 2 adding fave author...* good. Onward with reading and reveiw per the same time!

I have a horrible mind. The minute you wrote about Roxas eating lunch, i immediately thought of him and his Destiny Island lunchbox and for NO reason, Aladin thermos. ...YES, i pictured it...and now that i said it, so will you! But more to my point, i was afraid Roxas couldn't eat lunch with his friends cuz idk, Axel would be DOING him all the time? har har.

Axel's friends? who are they? ppl who have hearts? XD HA! no i'm HARDLY kidding. there is no jk in honesty. HA!
>_> Pfft. Olette is racist. no no no...RACIST. suggesting that the troubled have detention...she just said the 'N' word in my opinion. HA.

...o_o.
-_- is it sad that i ran away as soon as I read that Hayner had Seifer's beanie? like, i instantly felt he was going to kick MY ass so i decided it was best i just run from my computer and just get the hell outta there...is that sad...yes yes...>_>...<_<...T_T it is.

I imagine some of the most awesome hair under that hat. like clouds only laid down...maybe i'll draw it forget explaining it-_-

That kiss was far too violent. I just shit a brick and somehow...i'm mildly aroused...*smokes cig as he finishes story*

XD HA! ME AND AXEL HAVE THE SAME FEELINGS AND I QUOTE: I'M ASHAMED OF MYSELF!

lol, i can't imagine Roxas caring about gaydar. ;p lol. ...wait what the hell is Olette just doing here not getting any lovin lovin from the firey oven? shit i'll give her sum of my lovin. that girl is hot...-_- s!

o_o...-_- omg, Seifer is Kaiba's love child; friggen screaming at ppl who didn't even know he was w/ Hayner that they're trying to have a moment. There is no 'respect'...in Seifer.

Oh damnit, i wished Axel and Seifer beat the shit out of each other FML...*continues smoking* stupid other levelheaded boyfriends...
OVERALL?:

...*takes cold shower and repeats Axels words 'i am ashamed of myself...* LOL, i can has enjoyed myself mainly becauss it was just a moment in time. didn't really have to do with anything and stayed 90% in character. the other 10% in my opinion breaks down in just a few choice words OR what's called ICS (in character situation) where its a little harder to write a character IN character becaused u placed them in a situation that has never been seen in the anime/game/movie whatever ya know? But still you did a great job reguardless and for that i commend you...maybe i'll read some of your house and see how u did.

~this review will selfdestruct if you finish this
sentence. ;p
PencilsLovePaper
2009-09-04 . chapter 1
The author can has reviews, because her story is super epic, and amazing in every way possible.
Hi Kitsune
2009-08-14 . chapter 1
kyah~! it's so sweet...and i can completely imagine it...
-starts hyperventilating- Seiner luff is <3
gaarashikasasukefan
2009-07-27 . chapter 1
aw so cute =] i luved it!
Jade
2009-04-29 . chapter 1
Aww...that's adorable. Dude, like, seriously, no other words, just cutesy squirming. :D
Bonfiore'sGirl
2009-04-23 . chapter 1
Holy cow! Yeah you can haz reviews! I LOVE this fic! You, my friend, are a genious.
Ellipsis the Great
2009-04-20 . chapter 1
That...is so adorable. AND amazingly in character! Which is weird for a FLUFFY Seiner story! Very well done; keep up the amazing work!

shipet100
2009-04-17 . chapter 1
Lol, very nice. Keep up the good work.
Lady of Snow
2009-04-17 . chapter 1
this was so adorable! my favorite line was when seifer said "you know why." i just loved this whole story.
Ninny-na
2009-04-17 . chapter 1
I would have like..
So taken a picture.
x3
St.vn
2009-04-17 . chapter 1
D'aw. That was...

aw.

I want to hug them all.
FinalFallenFantasy
2009-04-17 . chapter 1
DAMMIT! I already reviewed but the blinking submissions page seems to be malfunctioning again... gr... Anyway!
This is a really sweet, adorable fic and I love it! I always like the idea of Hayner stealing Seifer's beanie - i always makes me chuckle. Well done - it's really good!
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