ha~ wow i loved it and i got the lemony snicket joke, i hated how he did that cut off the story completely to discribe a word... and it just ended lol fatastic!

After all the impossible "Style" "Stenny" "Bunny" and "CartmanXKyle" stories it is a refreshment to see a story that almost seems to shun South Park fanfic writers. Hopefully these authors will have some sympathy for the non-existent characters that they are forcing into a series of boy-on-boy fuckfests.

BRILLIANT. Absolutely hideously amusing.

Actually, the sad thing was I picked up pretty much all the references. Especially the Lemony Snicket one.

:D

10/10

--L&L

Hmm... yeah...
Now I feel bad. I have to write more for my fanfiction now.
Oh, good laughs had by me fyi. And I got Lemony Sniucket. I fucking am in LVE with his series... aw hell I'm in love with lots of serieses... *sigh* But yeah, good show chap.

That was /beautiful/. :3 I don't think I've ever seen such a direct parody of SSWTE, the fanfic I idolize most, and you pulled it off wonderfully. The scene with Bebe buying peaches had me on the floor.

Oh, and I too shall join the Ones Who Got The Lemony Snicket Reference. I was fucking obsessed with that series in the days of yore.

wow, benny-boy, u really hit the nail hard on the head this time, i mean, really. one of my favorite Style stories are I Feel So, and i loved the references u made. i also enjoyed how u kind of took a hit at urself making Pip the head of yet another organization. where's the pictures of pip naked with long blonde hair with his mask ? =(

but ya, i got the lemony snicket joke! =D
i loved the unfortunate events!

way to go, another story thats not too long and a laugh to read

absolutely freaking brilliant! loved it! nice Lemony Snicket reference, love that guys style of narration. and nice ending that wasn't really an ending, love a weird cut off
^_^
you win SouthPark fanfiction