AHAHAHAHAHAH Oh Ataru, you JERK!XDXD
And thinking about you were behaving so good lately!XDXD
I can't really recall the last time you received such a nasty lighting blast from Lum.
I hope that from now on he won't take for granted a instable thing like Lum's temper, even if they are much more closer than in the past, she can still berserk down all the Earth and space if she gets furious. But I know for sure Ataru will be able to make it up to Lum soon...I hopeXD
Although...“I figure out how to do that all on my own. Aren't you proud of me for that too?” AHAHAHAH I can't help but respect him!
Like I already said in the past reviews, occasional squabbles sometimes are in order in a couple, and I'm very happy that deeply, Ataru and Lum aren't changed, he lecherous and she jelous, I love them.

Very good chapter, I like this little relax moment episodes before the "main great mission", I can't wait! I'm amazed of your perseverance, Metakirby, all weeks, on friday evening(in Italy) a new chapter of your story is posted, punctual like the dawn. You're a real worker!XDXD

Congratulations again and again!

Aww...Metakirby, all of this is so beautiful...!
I absolutely love how you can make Lum and Ataru so affectionate toward each other, without making them going over their characters.
Kisses are still quite rare lately, but I can't really say I mind it. Those simple moments of comfort between the two are so nice...XD I really think that Ataru has a knack in soothing Lum, in his own way. Maybe this is the reason because she fell for him...in your world.
Aside the tender couple, I've to say GREAT! This new adventure is really catching on me!!XDXD I'm craving to know how it will goes on, I know it will be extra-funny!
AHAHAH Mendo and Tobimaro are such fools, so much pride in so little brains.XDXD
P.S. I'm very glad you appreciated my little sketchXD I very enjoyed doing it too.

Keep it up, girl!!

Awesome as ever Metakirby!!
EHEHEH Ataru'll never change, he will remains an indestructible super idiotic pervert forever!!XDXD I admire him for his good taste on clothing the girls in his dreams, but I think that, deeply, he drawn a very clear line between what is dream and what is reality. I can see he's getting closer to Lum more and more.
The thing that I like the most of your short stories is that you can transmit the affection between those two without necessarily using always sickening lovey-dovey romantic moments.

Like in "Dangerous double dating", just a funny exchange of jokes is enough to make understand how much they enjoy each other presence.

Do not misunderstand me, I love the particular way you make them act on romantic moments (I absolute adore the ending of chapter 17) but they wouldn't be Ataru and Lum anymore, without some healthy, funny bickering!!XDXDXDXDXDXD

I hope your fantasy will nener end!

Wow, that was close, I wonder how much Lum will be able to resist without raping Ataru on a love attack!!XD XD XD
Beautiful as ever Metakirby! I'm happy that you found a little space for Ataru and Lum in this chapter.
I can't wait to know what'll be the next plot!

good chap glad for ryuunosuke happiness, and at least her father wasn't say Gendo or Genma then she be REALLY screwed-up.

Good chap man! if your pressing for ideas how about the first day of school (with ataru trying his best to skip it) with ryuunosuke dad given extra money to find him and drag him to school (they decided to fight the boy that attract wierd to the man that is the embodiment of wierd!)

good chap the emotion the comedy, Ryuunosuke dad, pure gold!

good chap... and later Ryoko sell pictures of Shutaro in a dress to his entire school thanks to a hidden camera.

“Why can't I see them again?” AHAHAHAHAH
Your Ataru is probably the best one of all the fanfiction I read.
I love the good-natured hard time he constantly giving Lum.

Boy, Metakirby, your last story was very intriguing and really well done.
I always wanted to see a situation where a sincerely regretted Ataru has to face a fully enraged Lum and try to make up with her.
I was very anxious to know how it would be ended, and I liked very much the warm and sweet happy ending that you did for those two. Bravo!
I hope you'll post many other short stories like this one!
Keep on this!

P.S.Poor Benten

Love this chap.

AWESOME CHAP, The Lum ataru scenes were believable and awesome and the Mr. Fujinami scenes were funny!

HA funny and actiony

“If I lie perfectly still” he told himself in a codling voice “then they can't see me. Yes...they can't see me.”

HEHE that a line i suspect Caboose (Red vs Blue) to say btw you gotta watch RVB on youtube and read GS Mikami in onemana you won't be dissapointed.

cool, btw dude read Ghost sweeper mikami it has action and its hilarious, they even have there own version of Ataru!

COOL! after this saga can the next one focus on Mr. Fujinami that guys hilarious.