Brilliant story! I really enjoyed it! Perfect!

Pure enjoyment! I know your feelings on writing them together in the DQ, so may I just say, bravo! Oh, and thank you.

Funny and sweet and all Janeway and Chakotay...just how I like my fic!

As always I enjoyed reading your latest story, please keep writing JC stories!

And "enjoy it" I did! First of all, I admire your intestinal fortitude in keeping track of who was who during that particular episode. Second, what a *great* angle for a story! Well done. Very amusing, entertaining, and satisfying. This is *exactly* the sort of teasing I would imagine Janeway and Chakotay would be up to in the DQ. Now, quick, find another episode and do the same thing, wouldya please? ;)

That was an interesting 3 observations... I liked this story can you please add a second chapter to what happens next? I would be interested in knowing what Tom would say...

This is really good miz and I do know your stuff.
cheers

Very well written and clever! I love J/C banter. You do have a glitch though with a sentence going in several directions at one time when Chakotay says, "...when I came to Sickbay to take you to the brig so that Steth could be restore you to your own body.” I absolutely melt at your line: “I do know how difficult it is to disguise an arousal when around someone I love, Captain.” And what a great exit for Chakotay:
He looked back over his shoulder and said, “For the record, I love you, too.” Thanks for writing and posting "Three Observations"!

That was great! Loved the observations - always thought it a shame that there was no J/C in the DQ. Really enjoyed it.

This was such a delightful read Miz! I love the comment about the fire hose! Lol! I can just imagine...

I really liked this story! I always thought they should have had KJ on screen as TP, or however it works, you get what I mean lol Definitely different and definitely a good way to get her to indirectly say she loves him :)

Now that is a creative way to get her to admit she loves him!

Wow, that was, um, heated and very facinating. I LOVED IT! I bet they always had banter like that, otherwise they would have exploded from the obvious tention that was on the screen most of the time. At least the first parts. Again, I loved it.

lol terrific :)