SilverMoon,
I really enjoyed your story. It was well written and very cute. (Personally, my favorite task was the first one. The most valuable thing to Asuka= Fubuki. I thought that was really nice. )
I liked how you wrote Jim's and Asuka's characters. It definitely felt like they were in character. Especially Asuka. She acted like any girl would and at the same time, her reasonable self.
Great job on the fic. You're a great writer.
~B.G

this was an awesome fic. And the ending was too cute and funny for words. I haven't seen very many AsukaxJim fics, so do you think you'll write a sequel or something? please

Aww no wedding? Very cute fic though. Great storyline, and nice keeping of the people in character. I liked Manjoume and Fubuki friendship, but not the pairing, but the JimxAsuka was so sweet that I don't mind. ^^ Nicely done!

This is amazing!!

Everything is just perfect! The third test was enticing, and was really in character: Responsible, sensible, chivalrous Jim - and the yearn of liberty of Manjoume.

The fourth, unofficial test was maybe a bit less interesting but necessary.

the interaction between the two couples is pure love! *_* - the parallelisme between the two siblings and the two competitors is well done.

Love it. Such an excellent, original idea...

I adore Jim. Can't wait to see how this turns out
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Fantastic, fantastic, fantastic!
What a fun idea to play around with! Although the chemistry between Jim and Asuka seems to have erupted very quickly, you haven't made them shallow by saying that they love each other. At least, not yet. The characterization was spot on, and the entire story, although set in an alternate universe, makes sense.
Keep it up, and great job!
~Lady Scribetracker~

Love this story! ^^ I hope you update soon. I can't wait to read more. The storyline is great, and the characters are kept so well into character, even with Manjoume and his brothers and Fubuki taking Manjoume under his wing. Nicely done!

Wow. I like the heart to heart between Fubuki and Manjoume. Aw, Asuka and Jim looking at stars. That is so sweet and romantic. I love this story so far. Please update when you have the time. Thanks.

This is definately not a pairing I've thought much of, but you made me like it! This story is very well written, and you are very good at keeping everyone in character! I can't wait until the next chapter!
xXDarkUmbreonXx

I very much enjoyed reading this chapter. It was a work of art, in characterization and presentation. The way everything is coming together is extraordinary. Granted, I know what's coming next, but even if I didn't, I know that I'd love it.

Wow, that was a really well written first chapter. All the characters were actually in character and the facts fit together just nicely. I really liked how you didn't over due the romance parts by throwing in some funny stuff.

I liked the part about the slaying the dragons. Really funny.

This is one of the best starts to a romance novel that I have ever read, both on here and actual novels.

Please update this soon. I am really looking forward to the next chapter.

LOL!!

Fubuki is priceless! :)

great job! Every one is spot on, and your writing style is very pleasent to read.

and even with a popular concept as the challenges, and the princess' hand on the line, you were able to avoid any kind of caricature.

I hope the next part will come quickly!

good luck ^^

You know, I've been trying to think of a way to review this and not come over as a sugar-crazed fangirl, but I have this feeling that I'm gonna fail spectacularly.

Seriously, I'd heard good things about this story already, but it far, FAR exceeds my expectations! I can't stress enough how much I loved this, it's so good and such a refreshing change from the usual fics on this site! All the little details were just so awesome! (Juudai! Yubel! I absolutely laughed out loud when I read that part!)

I'm not one for begging, but I'll be waiting anxiously for you to update. Seriously, I reached the end of this chapter and I just couldn't believe it'd stopped. I'm really really looking forward to the rest of this!

Good story, I'm curious for the continuation^^

I have to say, this is probaby the best start to a romance story i have ever read. its well written and i even got a few laughs out of it. please dont take too long to update, or forget about it, as i can really see tis going far. x