This really could use some beta reading to clean up the spelling errors. Nevertheless, this was a very good story with a lot of twists in it. I'm actually surprised Jason didn't insist on going to the crash site to see if Tommy survived somehow.

awesome story

How sweet. Nice story. Plenty of action too.

OMG...OMG...OMG...GREAT...GREAT JOB...keep going! what's next?

You need to check your spelling and punctuation. But over all it was really good. Were the little bears based on the E-waks from like star-trek or something? Cuz that was a VERY good twist