Speechless!

I *love* Diary of Jane, and I though this was a wonderful fic to that. Although I don't read much Lizwin (I AM a closet Dizzie fan, though) but I still thought Edwin's thoughts were well put (and unfortunately it's so EASY to imagine her leaving him for Derek. He's the "cool, sexy, older guy" but hopefully she'll see what's meant to be)
Great job!

Good, I like that bit about "This time, Edwin was going to win." Thanks.

Nice story and nice work!!

Ally, this drabble was fantastic! I love how you made it angsty and dark-ish but it wasn't over the top. I also love Edwin's sort of insight in this. The fact that Lizzie wants Derek just makes so much more intense. Amazing, well-written and all around a great read! I hope you place in the contest! :D
~Symone

Not bad my favourite crocodile hunter, not bad at all. I'm glad you figured out how to write it out eventually!

Oh, that was really good!! I love the whole idea of Edwin wanting to win this time, as opposed to Derek always getting everything.
"even if she did fall victim to her own lust seconds later."
^^Oh, this was a really good line!!
Overall, I think you are absolutely AMAZING, and I hope maybe, just maybe, one day I can be half as amazing as you are now :)

I love it! YAY! This is wonderful! Great job, my dear! :)

I love how you managed to incorporate my two favorite pairings: Lizwin AND Dizzie. :)

Depressing, yes... but good. Fabulous job!