 BetaReject 2009-04-18 . chapter 1I have to say this was an amazing chapter! I utterly loved the interaction/discussion between Macbeth and Robyn. From when he catches her in the act to when she discovers he's Macbeth and the explanation that follows.
I thnk she really needed to hear what he had to say and I'm so glad that she was willing to listen. I thought it was great how you had her realize just who this man was and his relationship to her family.
Her nightmares too were great incredibly chilling and yet plausible especially given the fact she's lost so many she loves to the Hunters hatred.
Though I have to say Dingo's overriding the training hall bit had me laughing out loud. He's such a sweetheart really |