Beautiful and tragic. Very nice.

This is dark and the internal struggle between /Lavi/ and /Dirk/ is odd and a little endearing in a sick kind of way. :) This was spectacular in Lavi-Bookman POV. Happy Writing. :D

This is very good! (:
Do update soon.
I never woulda thought he'd say those things to Lenalee.
Very good job.
It is intriguing isn't it?
The thought of Lavi changing from Dirk to Lavi.

Oh wow. This was simply amazing! A lovely insight into "Dirk" and the transition into "Lavi". I loved his interactions with Lenalee and Kanda. It's interesting to see what Lavi's thinking and how he observes in the war, the two different perspectives he sees, compared to others. You did a wonderful job on this and I really enjoyed this.