 Amee Lynn 2009-11-09 . chapter 20i must admit, i THOUGHT i was going to be crying during the last chapter, especially after chapter 19...but this ending just made me smile! =) |
 Liddl15 2009-09-01 . chapter 20Ha! When I saw who'd written it I clicked right away and I wasn't disappointed! :D
It's shorter, not as detailed as the other ones I know from you, but it's great nevertheless!
Lydia |
 angel2goddess 2009-06-15 . chapter 20Wow... that's all that I can really say, wow... Once again, you have proven that your mastery of stories is impeccable, and amazing. This story is truly amazing, told in a different perspective, and yet still so captivating. Thank you once again for your amazing work, and for sharing it with us. |
 excessivelyperky 2009-05-20 . chapter 20Yes. And their example should be a warning for anyone who dares to be different from what the Ministry wants. Do what you're told, be what you're supposed to be, never be an unwanted loner or consort with same--or this can be your fate, too. |
 excessivelyperky 2009-05-20 . chapter 19Oh, yes. Hermione is full of mercy. It's the Wizarding World their children love who is not. After all, people have been exiled enough before for the results to be known. |
 excessivelyperky 2009-05-20 . chapter 18Ah. So exile turned out to be a death sentence anyway, and would have been even if they'd gone back as soon as they could. I'm sure Snape blames himself, and wishes Hermione did not have to share his punishment for daring to save the Wizarding World. |
 excessivelyperky 2009-05-20 . chapter 17Yes, they _are_ freer and happier the way they are. The Wizarding World is a small community, where one mistake brands you for life, as Severus well knows. I'm just glad that Hermione knows it too.
I hope their children aren't penalized while at Hogwarts for it, though. McGonagall can hold a grudge till it squeaks. |
 excessivelyperky 2009-05-20 . chapter 16Ha! Well, they had better christen the shop the right way--and if they use up a little champagne in the process, so much the better. |
 excessivelyperky 2009-05-17 . chapter 15Now that was a helpful and fun little dream! And if Snape did so much for someone who didn't really love him, what will he do for someone who does?
A perfume shop would be grand. And if some of that perfume was a little more _effective_ than others, then hey, good for the profit margin! |
 excessivelyperky 2009-05-17 . chapter 14Hah! Ron didn't take long to find someone new, no surprise there. But I suspect Hermione is going to teach Snape that he _can_ be loved, and rather successfully too. She's always been an overachiever. And besides, given just how stubborn Snape is, if he can love her it will be forever. |
 excessivelyperky 2009-05-17 . chapter 13Here's hoping someone remembered Muggle methods of birth control...
But even worshiping the porcelain throne is best done with a friend, if it must be done at all. |
 excessivelyperky 2009-05-17 . chapter 12Good chapter, and bravo for Dudley! Admitting he needed help must have been horrific for him. Well--Hermione probably won't have money problems even if they have to sell the McMansion. A lot of Snape's proper work can be done wandless, I suspect. And Hermione does need him around, just like he needs her. |
 excessivelyperky 2009-05-17 . chapter 11A baby-blue Aston Mini--my, that is a cute car! Amazing they all fit in it, actually. And yes, Hermione is babbling. I'm really glad that Dudders is there, and that Snape and Hermione have each other to hold on to. |
 excessivelyperky 2009-05-17 . chapter 10And yet, and yet--Snape was raised in the Muggle world. Maybe he can bear to be in it and without most magic as long as Tobias Snape isn't part of the picture. Besides, how much of potions work actually involves a wand? If he can't do wandless magic, once recovered, I'll eat my socks. Hermione--yes, she'll grieve, but most modern technology is not alien to her.
And maybe Snape can teach her how to fly. |
 excessivelyperky 2009-05-17 . chapter 9Hermione must be condemned, obviously; the Trio must be broken up and Harry Potter must learn his place. Snape has to go as well; he knows how many people in the Ministry were under the Imperius and how many were real collaborators or actual DE's still holding office, and obviously, _that_ voice must be silenced. Ron is clearly pinning his hopes on removing himself as a target and letting being a Weasley protect him; after all, Percy's star is on the rise now, and perhaps he's being treated better because of it. |