nice story =]
i wonder what zero will do...
update soon =D

``aileen~

Beautiful... Q,.Q xD *walks away to get tissues*

Awe...fluffy!!

Wow! That was neat! You should definitely continue your story. I'm in writer's block, and this is very inspiring to me. I would love to see more of the Day Class, and maybe you could have a couple easy-going chapters about their days together (ex. going to the mall). I'd love to see more quality Yume writing!

another great chapter!! XD it was awesome, all of the traditional stuff...Kaname's sweet :) , BUT YUKI BELONGS WITH ZERO!! XP hahahaha, great story, CONTINUE!!

oh...the end? Well since it's about their wedding party I didn's expect a long story :D but it's a lovely ending! ^_^ I love it and I will wait for other story of yours...^^

It was quite good, but I have to say that I'm fairly disappointed that you're holding this fanfic hostage. It's a bit silly to do that. You have twenty-two reviews after only three chapters. I'd say that's pretty darn good. You should be writing because YOU want to write a story that expresses a concept that you took and ran with. It shouldn't be about amassing a fandom. Try to think about that in the future, because if you're simply writing to have a giant fan base, then it's likely that you shouldn't be writing at all.

I'm sorry to say this, because you definitely have talent, and this fic can go somewhere, but your beginning author's note came off as a little childish. I hope you take my words into account.

Sincerely, Out-of-Control-Authoress

P.S., I would definitely like you to continue with this story, just for the record.

omg yes! - A

I kind of think that just because the number of reviews you have you are quiting, it isn't all that fair for the people that like the story. If you have one person that follows your story you should be happy, so don't stop just because you aren't reaching 100 reviews a chapter. - N

A and N

amazing..truly epic...best by far...write more please..Nissa-san..xx
p.s..I knew it was going to be Kiryu zero!

As a fellow writer I'm going to give you some advice

1) You should write for yourself. If other people like it its a big bonus but you should always write for yourself first.

2) Reviews on FFnet are hard to come by. Even if people don't review they might still be reading

3) I think you have a good story here so far and I would like to see it continue if you decide to do so.

The first one is the most important. Don't stop writing because you think people don't like it and don't change what you are writing because you think it will make other people happier. You should write what you want to write and what makes you happy to write and the rest with fall into place.

Yet again another great chapter,where do you get all thses ideas from! XD PLEASE CONTINUE WRITING!!

This story certainly looks promising. One suggestion, though: putting certain blocks of text in a center format is kind of annoying for people to read, no matter how short. Try to keep it consistent, and make it all left-side text. That's about it though. The characterization is quite lovely. I hope you update soon!

oh
whats nextt??
:)

Woah! That was nice reading hehe hanabusa..

First off all I am sorry to send anymous review before...and thanks to consider it ^_^
I love your story...and you are great...can update new chap within a day...XD