Wow holly this made me laugh so much, you are so good at writing. i am lynn's daughter btw and i am a total twilight nut haha! keep up your amazing talent cos this is an amzing story!

I'm a big fan of your style in writing HSM fics so I'm interested in seeing where you'll take the Twilight universe.

Wow! That was amazing!!
Can't wait to read the rest!
=D

AWW! This story looks really awesome! keep up the great work!!

Let the record state right now that I am reviewing a story that does not have a basketball captain or a brianiac as the main characters. You should be proud!

Very sweet. I love Fred the bunny story. Emmett is hilarious as always. You wrote the relationship between Jake and Nessie perfectly. I'm interested to see what will happen with the move and how Charlie will be affected by it. Anyways, amazing job Holly!

So, this was great, Miss Holly. I love Renesmee. She is so fantastic and I love your portrayal of her. And of course our sexually inclined Bella and Edward. I love Emmett as well. Awesome job! Can't wait til the next update!

welcome to the twilight world :D
LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE = the only way to describe how i feel about this story.
great job!
xo

Oh, I freaking LOVE it! OMG OMG OMG, Hollie, yet again you've managed to amaze with with yet another bloody fantastic story! It's freaking genius! I find it refreshing to be reading a Twilight story that is not told in first person, and wow, this chapter is just like...totally perfect. I adored the Emmett and Renesmee relationship at the beginning, it was just ADORABLE!

Thanks so much for this - and please update soon! - As well as your other stories ;):P

Whoaa! I'm left in awe once again!

ShineyStar xoxoxoxoxo

This was really good [: I can't wait to read more! You do such a good job Holly.