one word : beautiful

Ah, how poignant. That story played out well.

Sheer brilliance.

awww...

poor c.c.! why did lelouch choose to die!

You write with such beautiful prose, and you do bring up philosophy with such grace.

Tentative, poetic, tragic.

Just wow. It was awesome, man. My favorite part was when Lelouch asked what dying felt like and CC responded: “Like something you should only have to feel once".

How weird, I've never thought in my whole 12 years of existence to like something that has a genre that I loathed so much since I was a child because of the heavy feeling that I always dealt with when watching or even reading maybe...just maybe it's because I'm finally accepting the fact that it's not always a happy ending or happily ever afters here in 's always bound to be a tragedy, whether one likes it or not.

With that said, I bid you adieu and your story added to my favs.

this story could go a long ways! plz update soon

deep

wow. beautiful. amazing. brilliant.

that's all i can say.

- yukari-chan

Beauty, Beautifully constructed and written, beautiful in the way it shows us both sides, meaning C.C and Lelouche. To put it simply, beautiful.

Epic. Nuff' said

I think I read this on livejournal or something, but in case I didn't review then - I liked this a lot. The dark theme of it, the short scenes, everything is very beautifully done. My only issue would be that the 'story' snippet seemed a little odd. It fit in nicely with the rest, but the story itself kind of didn't make a heck of a lot of sense to me.

Aside from that, well done.

This is a really nice story, magnificent. Brilliantly written and perfectly timed; I enjoyed it much.

It fits so well, it could be part of the actual series.

It's a really well written tragedy.

Here's hoping you manage to write more like these.