derek, your a bitch.

um, if they're in monster form, susan and dr. c couldn't hold hands anyway, because his hand is smaller than one of her fingers, and that wouldn't do any good at all

PLEASE Keep writing!

WOW! Awesome story! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Check out my Monsters vs. Aliens fic! They're awesome! ;)

-A.F. '91

NO PLEZ DON'T LET SUSAN DIE, WHEN I READ THE END OF THIS CHAPTER I COULD ACTUARALY FELL DR.C'S HEART BRAKE #SNIFF#

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OH NOES! Poor Susan. I hope she'll be okay in the next chapter. I like the line you did for B.O.B. where he thought they were all going to hell LOL! I don't believe I ever saw Close Encounters of the Third Kind, but it sounds awesome. But it's a little hard for me to be picturing Susan and Dr. Cockroach holding hands together so much in this chapter. I thought she got change back into Ginormica.

close encounters of the third kind :D

that's a great movie!

and a good story BTW :P

GR. I HATE it when aliens screw up weddings

Aw, write fast! It's really good D

That was beautiful. I'm happy for Susan and Cockroach! Please update more chapters of this awesome fic.

BTW, I've got my own MvA fic in the works, so hopefully, you'll be looking forward to that.

Keep up the good work!

-A.F. '91

Awesome fic to begin with! Can't wait what happens next!

I really don't understand how their wedding could be on hold if they were almost finish before the kiss got that close. I swear, the way you write this really reminds me of the Open Season 2 plot! (dumb sequel too by the way) especially when you had Derek approach Susan differently.

If they created a Monsters Vs. Aliens sequel, I hope they would used your idea. If not, well just be glad that you made something very creative and be proud of it.

But it's still a very good story to me. I really do hope they'll get married on time after their mission is over.

Are they not still tecnically "marred?" they did take there vows

This is sad. I want to cry. The guesses I have in my head are even sadder. Update

that was just mean! pleze update soon