Haha, that was cute. xD Great job! (:

like I said GREAT STORY

Loved the last line :) Fabulous job

I really like this. It's really good.

*Alyssa

Cute!:D

I could so see this. That man is just to perfect. Nobody is that perfect. Good story.

LOL! nice... is this going to be a story or r u just going to leave it as one shot?

I like it please update soon ;)

I LOVE it so far. I knew Hotch had to have at least one flaw and now we know what it is...why is she so cranky though? More soon please!

hahaha Great one shot! I love Em/Hotch

cute

Was this perhaps inspired by all your unpacking and crap everywhere? ;)

It's so funny reading somebody else' H/P again! You know I haven't read anybody's in months, and I'm like 'hey they're doing other stuff! And when did they get a study?'

I found this one particularly amusing because I just put in my story that Hotch is like anal about neatness because of his marine dad.

And I LOVE that your version of the prompt is that he's a closet slob and my version is that he's a family annihilator! Clearly ONE of us has some issues but I don't want to point any fingers . . .