| Reviews for Ill Intentioned |
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going-rogue2374 1/31/11 . chapter 1very cute hope you write more soon ;) rogue |
Dragoness 2/23/10 . chapter 1 I thought your story was really cute! I love how you got Red's caring across. Also, Doktor Frogg was portrayed very well. I think a way to improve is putting more details, like describing the room and such. But I thought it was cute! I'm also writing a story about the League. I'm not really used to fanfiction, sorry if my review is sorta lame. |
Jack-Spicers-Girl 12/27/09 . chapter 1 Oh god no not soup made by Red! NOES! XD |
Eleos Argentum 11/4/09 . chapter 1Funny. n.n |
firegirl 9/22/09 . chapter 1 that...was...AWESOME! try 2 make another chapter,please. |
Butcher Jones 6/6/09 . chapter 1D'aww, that was adorable. 3 I wish it was longer though! LOSE hurt/comfort fic is just too sweet. Continue? Please? :3 |
Lovelorn Lindsey 5/3/09 . chapter 1I hitted the button, now what! Ohh, that was a tricky button, huh? Well, I, too, have the tricks! Just...not here. I liked this, XD. Voltar can be such a jerk. And Red is so sweet...and Frogg, well, there's no words for that, other than these, these are okay, anything else, no go. I don't think I have any criticisms, so, ya know, keep it up. |
IAmYourPhobia 5/3/09 . chapter 1lol Nice! Very amusing. XD |
TitanWolf 4/28/09 . chapter 1this is hilarious |
Diana26.5 4/24/09 . chapter 1"Excuse me for trying to build a dramatic moment!" HaHa! that's an awesome line! A wonderful story, very well written. BTW what's lentil? |
kyrotec 4/19/09 . chapter 1 That was very nice. I really like your writing and I love this show. Fourty-six fanfics? That is impressive... |
Kraven the Hunter 4/19/09 . chapter 1I like your L.O.S.E. stories. They seem like little bite-sized episodes, like what they have in the videos section of the official site. |
Wolfyfox 4/19/09 . chapter 1haha the great voltar sick? we were just asking for this one |