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blue-eyed-wondergirl
2009-10-12 . chapter 10
Hope everything is going okay and get back to the stories when you can. Take care and don't threat!
Priincess-Sapphiire
2009-10-07 . chapter 10
Aww, Well at least you let us know. Hope you get your work done =]
ITman496
2009-10-06 . chapter 10
okay! I hope you are doing better soon! ^^
BuckleWinner
2009-10-06 . chapter 10
awe dang! oh well, school is more important than writing this story. but you better finish it! lol, just kidding. i look forward to seeing the end!
Spidey2
2009-09-03 . chapter 9
loved it! keep going! oh, and here is my email address:

I need to talk to you about something
Priincess-Sapphiire
2009-09-02 . chapter 9
This is an amazing story! Can't wait for updates! This is for sure a story to add to my favourites =]
xJustAnotherDreamerx
2009-08-24 . chapter 9
Awesome, she totally kicked those losers' butts! I liked how you wrote how she took each and everyone one of them down. I would have loved to see their faces! And to answer their question, yes, just because she's KITT'S new driver automatically makes her better than they are, lol.

I'm glad you're feeling better, sorry that you were sick for so long. What did you have?

Thanks for updating so soon, I loved the chapter.
ITman496
2009-08-24 . chapter 9
lol, YAY! SHE PASSED! GO MIKAH!
blue-eyed-wondergirl
2009-08-23 . chapter 9
Way to go Mikah!
Kitarensen
2009-08-23 . chapter 9
Great chapter!

I do hope some of the other cadets become recurring characters.
BuckleWinner
2009-08-23 . chapter 9
AWESOME! I love this chapter! I like how Kitt keeps cheering Mikah up and keeps her out of negative thoughts. And Mike's coming back soon?! YAY! Now you really have me on the edge of my seat waiting! Keep this up!
Rainack
2009-08-17 . chapter 8
Poor Mikah! But another great chapter! Can't wait to read more.
Kitarensen
2009-08-16 . chapter 8
*Long time no see*

This chapter was pretty good, but I felt this chapter didn't really further the story much.

As for pace, it could be sped up just a bit.

keep at it!
xJustAnotherDreamerx
2009-08-16 . chapter 8
What I would do for that chip. That would make life SO much easier. Mikah is one lucky girl.

Oh my gosh! She took a roundhouse to the stomach?? And done by a professional no less! That must have hurt, I'm surprised she didn't throw up.

Poor Mikah, I was feeling so bad for her at the food restriction part. You see, I was eating homemade delicious peach cobbler at the time and if ANYBODY tried to take it away from me, I would have destroyed them.

KITT is kind of being an a**. I bet KARR would have let her eat anything she wanted.

Great chapter as usual, you never disappoint!
My-Friend-KITT
2009-08-16 . chapter 8
OMG! HI! Missed ya...Missed this story!
Excellent!
I absolutely love the Mikah and KITT link!
My most favorite line here was...
-“If I didn’t know better, I’d say that you were actually enjoying this.”

“Perhaps” he had a sparkle in his eyes as he smiled, confirming Mikah’s internal suspicion.-

I laughed outloud when I read it...it was that good!

Excellent Chapter, Rio!
Keep it up when you can...Please. :)
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