A very well written tale indeed. It was adorable, and funny, and romantic without being a piece of overbearing fluff. Great job.

- Sonfaro

I thought you did a very wonderful job. You kept Harlan and Catalina as themselves but more grown up and obviously through experiences. I really liked how you handled their conversation and the whole thing of Catalina coming back.

Harlan's response to Cat's outburst was perfect.

And I love how she kissed him on the cheek and then he finished it. That whole part was so sweet.

Great job. Hope to hear more from you.

Wonderful! I grew up with this show, and the first season was by far my favorite. I loved watching Harlan and Catalina together then, and I loved reading about them together in your story now! A lovely fic.